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Everyone Else Submissions - Round 2

Jun 12, 2008 12:10

Please go read the Submission and Feedback Rules/Guidelines before submitting anything.

And now, here are the other various character, pairings, and grouping prompts.

( Office relationships are never a good idea. Yeah. So let's just try to avoid them. But, um, if you already have one, you should disclose it to HR. )

round 2, everyone else

Comments 25

When I Grow Up, Karen/Toby, Beaches of Costa Rica, PG foodygoody June 13 2008, 15:48:34 UTC

“How was Beach Day?” Toby asked ( ... )

Re: When I Grow Up, Karen/Toby, Beaches of Costa Rica, PG bebitched June 16 2008, 03:57:39 UTC

I loved this. Watching the interaction between Karen and Toby (who, come to think of it, never had any interaction when they really could have compared notes) and then him watching the three of them like an outsider in a science experiment. Very interesting.

Re: When I Grow Up, Karen/Toby, Beaches of Costa Rica, PG phil_urich June 20 2008, 02:01:36 UTC

this felt like such a true Toby moment. To nearly have it and watch every bit of it taken away. One day Toby will have it all...

Re: When I Grow Up, Karen/Toby, Beaches of Costa Rica, PG stevsie87 July 17 2008, 03:41:36 UTC

i like this a lot. toby needs someone to go after him in a bad way. damn that jim halpert and his "everybody loves me"-ness.

Dunder Mifflin this is Rolando, Pam/Rolando, "Dunder Mifflin this is...", PG13 bebitched June 23 2008, 00:46:44 UTC

“Dunder-Mifflin, this is Rolando ( ... )

Re: Dunder Mifflin this is Rolando, Pam/Rolando, "Dunder Mifflin this is...", PG13 foodygoody June 28 2008, 15:56:01 UTC

Oh this is so funny! Rolondo is... the receptionist in Karen's office? Damn my shoddy memory. I love the horizontal stripes line and the brave little toaster line and the fact that the receptionists have their own little support network.

Re: Dunder Mifflin this is Rolando, Pam/Rolando, "Dunder Mifflin this is...", PG13 bebitched June 28 2008, 18:08:06 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, he had a itty-bitty role in Branch Wars, so I had some room to play around with his character. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Going Away Present, Toby/Kelly, Picture, PG foodygoody June 24 2008, 05:20:13 UTC

After Toby was escorted out of the building by the guard, he kept Kelly company in the parking lot while she waited for Darryl and the band to finish packing up.

They sat under the security light, and bored, Kelly went though his box full of papers and mementos from his years of working there. The papers were boring, but the pictures of Sasha were adorable and then there was the rock ( ... )

Re: Going Away Present, Toby/Kelly, Picture, PG stevsie87 July 17 2008, 03:40:24 UTC

aww i really liked this. kelly feeling bad for toby but not being able to express it the way she wants. this was my fave: Kelly wanted to buy Toby lots and lots of those pills so he could smile like that. that was just...right.

consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13 bebitched June 27 2008, 15:45:09 UTC

Karen should find it ridiculous that the light spray jetting out of the fountain and tickling her arm is making her feel some weird emotional cocktail of dejected and annoyed. She should dry her eyes and find a ride home, before all her friends make plans and she’s left a mere vagrant on the streets of New York City. She should be grateful that the camera crew wrapped up for the day before this whole breaking her heart in public thing, that there won’t be some tangible reminder of her duress and embarrassment caught on tape for the world to see ( ... )

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13 michellek June 30 2008, 06:25:45 UTC

I like this a lot. You've captured both of them very well.

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13 bebitched July 1 2008, 18:03:36 UTC

Thank you so much!

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13 stevsie87 July 17 2008, 03:38:46 UTC

nicely done. i completely agree that your characterization is right on for this moment.

Thread 5

Seiko Timepiece, Michael/Holly, Touch, PG sunshine_hippie June 28 2008, 02:34:16 UTC

Michael was reading the two page e-mail Dunder Mifflin had sent out involving the current job position of Ryan Howard. He wasn't really reading, more like skimming. But he had skimmed enough to read the words "fired" and "no longer able to apply for a job" and "facing up to fifteen years." He couldn't help but feel his heart sink for the poor little guy. It was hard to remember Ryan as the temp. who started the fire with the image of him in handcuffs plastered all over the news. The worst part was the after effect. Michael had spent most of his working days signing release form after releasing form, insuring the integrity and privacy of the company ( ... )

Re: Seiko Timepiece, Michael/Holly, Touch, PG michellek June 30 2008, 06:28:11 UTC

This was so adorable, I loved it.