Everyone Else Submissions - Round 2

[girlie_girl_23]

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consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13

[bebitched]

Karen should find it ridiculous that the light spray jetting out of the fountain and tickling her arm is making her feel some weird emotional cocktail of dejected and annoyed. She should dry her eyes and find a ride home, before all her friends make plans and she’s left a mere vagrant on the streets of New York City. She should be grateful that the camera crew wrapped up for the day before this whole breaking her heart in public thing, that there won’t be some tangible reminder of her duress and embarrassment caught on tape for the world to see

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13

[michellek]

I like this a lot. You've captured both of them very well.

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13

[bebitched]

Thank you so much!

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13

[stevsie87]

nicely done. i completely agree that your characterization is right on for this moment.

Re: consequences of a disaster you can't see coming, karen/jan, hardcore self-destruction, pg13

[bebitched]

Thank you!