Surprises

[_alicesprings]

Title: Surprises
Written By: _alicesprings
Category: Noah Who? Alison’s POV
Rating: R
Author's Notes: This is a sequel to my fic Realizations, though it can be read as a stand alone that deviates from canon after the PDA kiss/union reps meeting episode. I had a lot of issues writing this, and I’m still not entirely happy with how it turned out. Alison POV

Comments

[rtruffles]

This was great! I loved that Ali was planning on putting Luke and Noah back together and have her come to realize that Noah is a douche and that Reid is a much better fit for Luke!

I loved it!

[_alicesprings]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[_alicesprings]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[nancygrew]

You really captured Luke's sweetness! I loved the ending with Casey being such a DUDE. Having Alison realize how unaffected Noah looks after the conversation that upset Luke was a really nice touch. Noah never seemed bothered by his and Luke's breakups [except the last one he appeared upset for an episode or two but I still got the impression with him that he expects Luke to come crawling back]. Nice job.

[_alicesprings]

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it!

[csifan3]

OH, this was lovely! I liked that you picked Ali for the POV too :)
And that last scene is just :D

[_alicesprings]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[bigboobedcanuck]

My only issue with this story is that I couldn't put my e-reader down this morning and I was late for work!

Loved seeing Alison coming around, and I just adore watching Luke and Reid's sweetness (and hotness!) through other people's eyes. Although I was hoping she'd linger in the storeroom a bit longer and witness a bit more action. ;) You wrote this beautifully.

Reid rolls his eyes again. “Christ. That’s like gay sex 101,” Reid scoffs. “You have been deprived,” Reid says. “Wait ‘til we actually do something kinky

[_alicesprings]

Aww, thank you, bb! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it enough to let it make you late for work! :D

Thank you for the wonderful feedback!