Surprises

[_alicesprings]

Title: Surprises
Written By: _alicesprings
Category: Noah Who? Alison’s POV
Rating: R
Author's Notes: This is a sequel to my fic Realizations, though it can be read as a stand alone that deviates from canon after the PDA kiss/union reps meeting episode. I had a lot of issues writing this, and I’m still not entirely happy with how it turned out. Alison POV

Comments

[bigboobedcanuck]

My only issue with this story is that I couldn't put my e-reader down this morning and I was late for work!

Loved seeing Alison coming around, and I just adore watching Luke and Reid's sweetness (and hotness!) through other people's eyes. Although I was hoping she'd linger in the storeroom a bit longer and witness a bit more action. ;) You wrote this beautifully.

Reid rolls his eyes again. “Christ. That’s like gay sex 101,” Reid scoffs. “You have been deprived,” Reid says. “Wait ‘til we actually do something kinky.”

Luke laughs and Reid’s eyes soften in a way Alison’s never seen before. It’s... nice. Really nice, actually. He’s looking at Luke like he’s something precious, something amazing. He cups Luke’s cheek in his hand and Luke leans into it, looking up at Reid through his eyelashes as Reid’s thumb brushes across Luke’s cheekbone. Alison can practically feel the heat from their gaze from her spot across the room.

Reid smiles at Luke and the way it transforms his whole face into something gentle, something incredibly handsome, makes Alison’s heart beat a little faster.

You and me both, Alison! *happy sigh*

Casey pulls a face. “I know, I know,” she says. “But look at Luke; doesn’t he look happy to you?”

Casey follows her gaze and nods. “Yeah, I gotta admit, the doc seems to be doing something right.”

“I know, right?” Alison says. “It’s crazy - the guy usually acts like a total jackass - but I was just thinking about the last time Luke looked that happy with Noah.”

Casey’s face goes blank. “Exactly,” Alison says. “I don’t remember either.”

Loved this, and the little Casey/Alison moments, too. Bravo!

[_alicesprings]

Aww, thank you, bb! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it enough to let it make you late for work! :D

Thank you for the wonderful feedback!