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DPP: Creativity Week Day 3 - What were they thinking?

Oct 19, 2011 14:47

Previously on DPP:
Monday: Dialogue - The play's the thing. Prompts are open, but no takers
Tuesday: Icons - There are some gorgeous pilots icons there for us all to share in, so please leave some love for the creators, and possibly make some of your ownThese posts are open all week, so if you feel a burst of creativity hit, please do go join in ( Read more... )

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Trapped... kdbleu October 19 2011, 20:27:34 UTC

Trapped ( ... )

Re: Trapped... sugarhaven October 19 2011, 22:01:58 UTC

Beautifully written. Given that Kara was dealing with the trauma of her injury, the lingering effects of Leoben's brainwashing, the unresolved situation with Lee and the inability to get out of the situation with Sam, I am no longer surprised that she was feeling so burnt out in Maelstrom.

"She occupies her afternoon trying to figure out how Sam’s love can feel so much like being cornered."
Loved that line.

Re: Trapped... kdbleu October 19 2011, 23:33:41 UTC

I've been thinking about this section of story quite a bit lately. It's one of the places where the lack of canon details and motivation really gives me fits. Nothing feels resolved between the algae planet and Maelstrom, just put on hold, and I don't think Lee is the only thing making Kara feel trapped. :(

Glad it worked for you. :D

Re: Trapped... winegums October 19 2011, 23:09:27 UTC

lovely, and so sad :(

Re: Trapped... kdbleu October 19 2011, 23:34:06 UTC

Thank you. It is sad, no gettin' around it.

Re: Trapped... scifishipper October 20 2011, 00:30:48 UTC

So sad that Lee didn't go to her, set himself up in a decision that he couldn't take back. :(

Lovely!

Re: Trapped... kdbleu October 20 2011, 00:44:17 UTC

Lee is like that sometimes. Sometimes even when one intends for him to do something different. ;)

Thanks.

Re: Trapped... witherwings October 20 2011, 12:12:38 UTC

The red and yellow and blue begin to feel like a way out, real and permanent. Even if she doesn't understand how or why.

Oh! So achey and beautiful. You've really hit it out of the park here. Thank you ♥

Re: Trapped... kdbleu October 20 2011, 14:44:36 UTC

Aw, thank you. I'm not always a huge fan of writing (I mean me writing) Kara in pain, but the arc that gets to Kara to Maelstrom has been on my mind lately. Glad you liked. :)

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