Umibe: Hyde

[nnir]

I’m not sure if this is true and well it’s probably not but the idea won’t leave my head, so with the best of my abilities I’ll try to keep it realistic!

Pairing: Hyde/Gackt

Rating: T

Summary: It was just one song, from a time so long ago; really, it meant- it means nothing.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Hyde or Gackt and Hyde owns his own song “Umibe”

Comments

[esstellionn]

ummmm ^^ nice, very nice! keep writing! <3

[nnir]

Such a short review~ hahaha don't worry I will! <3

[b_sim]

Heehee, yeah, I remembered there was a discussion somewhere about Hyde writing this song for Gackt. ^^ In fact, I was thinking for the past two to three days about writing one too. XD

It was mentioned in another fic too, I think... But not through out the entire fic like yours, just mentions of it.

But anyways, on the fic itself:

Very lovely written! Though I want to whack Gackt because he stopped contacting Hyde just because he thought it wouldn't be right. And Hyde having fun on stage with L'Arc again! Aww...I love our rainbow boys~

[nnir]

A discussion really? as in stuff in articles or just fans talking? hha it just hit me one day and when I writing this the story just made itself up as I went along all the way to the point I was trying to portray!

I'm actualy proud of this one mostly~ but I think I know the one you're talking about :3

I know right! I thought in a part two of sorts I could write out his "real" reasons for not contacting Hyde and all that jazz~ but anway I love laruku~ they're all so cute!

[b_sim]

Just fans talking. But discussion makes it sound more professional and not just fangirling. XD

I'm actually glad that the story revolved around the song, instead of just mentioned it. It really is such a pretty song~

I'll be looking forward to it if you write it! :DD

[pimpinhyde]

I was going to be honest, but it seems lately that honesty comes across as too harsh for people. Can you take it as it's meant?

Your writing style doesn't make me cringe like some. Your pictures painted were simple and quick to process- concise might be your word.

I enjoyed it. I would have enjoyed it more without the typos, xD they distract.

Occ? No. I think it was fine.

I especially liked the ending of letting go of his worries for the moment and accepting the now of what was important.

Please write more. I suspect better things are yet to come from you. Thank you for sharing!

[nnir]

I'm good with critizism, it only makes me what to do better!

Though I must admit I didn't think I had typos, could you point them out to me? I'll go and fix them when I can for better future reference.

I'll keep writing most difinitly! hopefully the part two in Gackt's point of view will be better =3

[faded_poetry]

This is good! There was angst and love and I like it when Gackt is just, Gackt you know? So many stories tend to dramatize him. =D

[nnir]

So he was good? not too out of character? I'm glad~ ^-^

Though I'm not sure how people dramatize him, of course I'm not sure how he really is; though I do see how people dramatize Hyde :3

[enyucielclover]

Hi! first time posting in your LJ ^^U How are you?
What a great fic!! ;__; *hugs*

I think it would be interesting to know Gackt side of the story ^^ but well.. that's what I think.
Take care ;D!!

[nnir]

Hello~ it's no problem, I'm happy to get your attention enough to leave a thought! I'm good, how about you?

Thank you! with that in mind I shall go write out his side of the story though it'll be a while till it's up, care to wait a while? :3

[enyucielclover]

Hi!! I'm fine, thank you ^^
It's ok, don't worry, I'll wait as long as it takes. Be calm, so the story flows step by step :D
And... well, could I add you as a friend? So I'll keep up with your LJ ;D
Take care and have a nice day!!

[nnir]

But of course! I'm always happy to make new friends <3