pairechallenge #14: Flying - 'Fear of Flying'

Oct 18, 2007 01:48

Title: Fear of flying
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pairechallenge, flying, one shot, pg-13

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nayden October 18 2007, 12:03:49 UTC
beautifully written, loved it *hug*

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nmidian October 18 2007, 20:45:20 UTC
Thank you! *hugs back*

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joanna_484 October 18 2007, 14:08:28 UTC
Beautiful depiction of Peter's raw insecurities about the next phase of his relationship with Claire! And bookending the fic with lyrics from 2 Sarah songs is a lovely touch :)

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nmidian October 18 2007, 20:50:25 UTC
Thank you Joanna! Always pictured Peter as as very insecure young man, I guess that growing up in the Petrelli household does either turn you into a shark (like Nathan) or the opposite... And I love Sarah, she is the best. :)

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kbobcora October 18 2007, 15:25:09 UTC
wow!! That was intense!!

Loved it

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nmidian October 18 2007, 20:51:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

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michelsita October 19 2007, 16:27:06 UTC
Querido! *hug*

First, of course I'm listening to Sarah McLachlan... and I give you extra points for using her songs. ;)

You did it again, pictured a silent moment between them and made it powerful and stunning with a word. I could feel Peter's internal fight and his resolve that this.. them, something unnamed can never be less than perfect.

I adore that he knows, he loves her and sees in her the same love but still is uncertain. Years of masking the truth gives you that, falling in love is that, jumping from a clift with your eyes closed holding your lover's hand and praying it will be alright.

Cuidate mucho, abrazos miles!

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nmidian October 19 2007, 23:52:35 UTC
Amiga mia, :)

I knew you were a Sarah fan as myself (and K's Choice too!) I'm so happy you liked the ficcy, I was a bit scared that I hadn't let it clear it was a figuratively-speaking kind of flight the one Peter and Claire were dealing with here (you never know with these two!).

Espero que todo te este yendo muy bien.
Con mucho amor desde el otro lado del charco
Nick

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ohsodazzling October 21 2007, 00:23:19 UTC
Always so beautiful, mi vida! I love your explorations of Peter's fears and insecurities, and his wondering if his fantasy was really too much for him to handle.

<3

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nmidian October 21 2007, 01:33:50 UTC
Thank you for that. I love to explore that part of Peter because it is something I can easily relate myself to. Thank you god, my family is quite normal and nothing quite like the Petrelli's, but somehow I've ended up being this slightly insecure kind of guy.

Now, if I could do something about getting superpowers...

Love
Nick

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