One Really Weird Day

Feb 13, 2010 23:19

Title: One Really Weird Day
Disclaimer: They are not mine and never will, sadly D:
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: OT5, Key-centric
Summary: Kibum waked up like every other day but today is different. You ask why? Well for some reason everyone is acting a little weird around him. Why does it seems like everyone just wants to jump him from all sudden?

Here!! )

ifanfic, member: key, author: n, rating: pg-15

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miss_circle February 14 2010, 06:28:55 UTC
Nooo! You beat my spot! *cries*

LOL

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njrv16 February 17 2010, 23:20:08 UTC
I'm so so so glad you enjoyed it, makes me all happy :D
We all know the manager has got to secretly have the hots for Key XD

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miss_circle February 14 2010, 06:27:34 UTC
SPOT!

I love this! This is hilarious! All of them are like teenagers who just hit puberty *well, they are actually* xDD

Some constructive critics: you have a lot to work out on your grammar, dear. But that's okay, bb. I still get what you mean. And practice makes perfect.

Keep writing! :D

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njrv16 February 17 2010, 23:32:50 UTC
LOL People tend to forget they actually are teenagers well except Onew but he acts like one (or younger XD ).

Thanks for the critic :D but trust me I KNOW my grammar sucks D: Not even on my mother language my grammar is good T_T but I hope that with time I'll get better.

I'm glad you liked it and I'm more glad that it was understandable, I'm always afraid people wont get what I mean.

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xxqod February 14 2010, 07:28:25 UTC
hehe.
It's so lovely and smexy XD
Just like it has to be with Key :D

I was suspicious about the pheromones, happy I was right XD
Everyone groping Key and shamelessly flirting with him iis so much wanted! XD

I really liked it! :)
<3 ~~

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njrv16 February 17 2010, 23:37:20 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! XD
Sorry for the late reply college has been killing this past two weeks. I don't even have time to read fics. T_T

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