I love your Jim's stream of consciousness as we hear his story of these events. And how besotted he is with Spock, but has no idea he's broken up with Uhura, and how Spock is all stoic with Jim, and looks after him and protects him, and Jim and Spock end up full of sex juice and go at it in a wooded glade and how Jim feels dreadful for what he thinks he's done, but it's okay because Spock puts him right and then sexytiems....uh...no, I just made that last bit up... because you did a fade to black for the next year, but I'll forgive, because it was such an awesome story, and who needs sex?*
I thought it was brilliant the Klingon ambassador being that Klingon (and hopefully Jim's got the phrasing correct now) and Spock gets all possessive and kills the flowers and any ardour the ambassador may have been habouring towards Jim. :-)
*the wooded glade incident totally doesn't count because no visible cocks were involved in the making of that scene.**
*cough* Re: fade to black - It's not my fault! There were deadlines and I had to make the hard (SO HARD) choice between plot and porn and I must've been drunk because plot won.
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 1nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:34:14 UTC
*** Jim emerges from their second meld with the same sense of ease as from their first. Only this time, when he leans up to press his lips against Spock's, he does it with the full knowledge that not only does he love, completely, absolutely, but he is loved in return.
It's headier than any drug.
Spock's fingers shift from the meld points to cradle the back of his head, keeping him in place as his dry, hot tongue slips out to trace the seam of Jim's lips, petitioning for entrance. Jim allows it, obviously, parting his lips on a groan. He's fully hard in seconds but Spock's tongue is tentative, almost too gentle for Jim and his months of pent-up longing. He wants everything Spock can give him. He wants it now, damn it. When he can feel it without the influence of some fucked up drug
( ... )
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 2nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:36:36 UTC
A slight increase of pressure is all the warning he gets before he's drawn completely into the blistering heat of the meld. This one is nothing like the first two, initiated to soothe and communicate, respectively. This time Spock's emotions are all around him, burning him with the intensity of his desire and his love and, yes, his physical need. It's like being thrown into a sea of pure sensation and Jim's perfectly willing to drown in it. How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.
Spock? he gasps, as the feedback continues to jolt through him. This isn't exactly helping the delay-Jim's-orgasm project.
Back in his quarters, Jim's body is writhing beneath Spock's. Needy moans are bubbling, completely unrestrained, from his throat and fuck he can feel it, there and in the meld. He can feel Spock's reactions all around him, and over him, and he can't separate anymore what's action and what's redoubled reflection. It's all good. So good
( ... )
This was a wonderful piece, a creative spin on 'the aliens made them do it'. But what I really loved was how genuinely sorry Jim was when he thought he'd screwed up Spock and Uhura's "relationship". It just shows what kind of a guy he is *sigh*
And the Klingon encounter was too funny for words!
*nod* My favourite thing about Kirk's character (even and above his genius, smoking hotness, charisma and general badassery) is his loyalty. This is the guy that risked his career to chase a rumour that his friend might still be alive, that's put his life on the line, again and again for his friends and for his principles. There's just no way, in my mind, that he'd be able to betray somebody he cares about willingly :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it (especially the Klingon bit :D)
Comments 100
I always love the "Kirk pining after Spock" angle
Reply
Thanks for reading :)
Reply
Reply
Reply
re cupid - I tried to make him more fang-y but in the end he came out kind of... cute? So I coloured him dark XD
Reply
I love your Jim's stream of consciousness as we hear his story of these events. And how besotted he is with Spock, but has no idea he's broken up with Uhura, and how Spock is all stoic with Jim, and looks after him and protects him, and Jim and Spock end up full of sex juice and go at it in a wooded glade and how Jim feels dreadful for what he thinks he's done, but it's okay because Spock puts him right and then sexytiems....uh...no, I just made that last bit up... because you did a fade to black for the next year, but I'll forgive, because it was such an awesome story, and who needs sex?*
I thought it was brilliant the Klingon ambassador being that Klingon (and hopefully Jim's got the phrasing correct now) and Spock gets all possessive and kills the flowers and any ardour the ambassador may have been habouring towards Jim. :-)
*the wooded glade incident totally doesn't count because no visible cocks were involved in the making of that scene.**
**I'm teasing, really! ;-)
Reply
Buuuuuut... I have a present for you.
Reply
Jim emerges from their second meld with the same sense of ease as from their first. Only this time, when he leans up to press his lips against Spock's, he does it with the full knowledge that not only does he love, completely, absolutely, but he is loved in return.
It's headier than any drug.
Spock's fingers shift from the meld points to cradle the back of his head, keeping him in place as his dry, hot tongue slips out to trace the seam of Jim's lips, petitioning for entrance. Jim allows it, obviously, parting his lips on a groan. He's fully hard in seconds but Spock's tongue is tentative, almost too gentle for Jim and his months of pent-up longing. He wants everything Spock can give him. He wants it now, damn it. When he can feel it without the influence of some fucked up drug ( ... )
Reply
Spock? he gasps, as the feedback continues to jolt through him. This isn't exactly helping the delay-Jim's-orgasm project.
Back in his quarters, Jim's body is writhing beneath Spock's. Needy moans are bubbling, completely unrestrained, from his throat and fuck he can feel it, there and in the meld. He can feel Spock's reactions all around him, and over him, and he can't separate anymore what's action and what's redoubled reflection. It's all good. So good ( ... )
Reply
And the Klingon encounter was too funny for words!
Reply
I'm glad you enjoyed it (especially the Klingon bit :D)
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
Leave a comment