I love your Jim's stream of consciousness as we hear his story of these events. And how besotted he is with Spock, but has no idea he's broken up with Uhura, and how Spock is all stoic with Jim, and looks after him and protects him, and Jim and Spock end up full of sex juice and go at it in a wooded glade and how Jim feels dreadful for what he thinks he's done, but it's okay because Spock puts him right and then sexytiems....uh...no, I just made that last bit up... because you did a fade to black for the next year, but I'll forgive, because it was such an awesome story, and who needs sex?*
I thought it was brilliant the Klingon ambassador being that Klingon (and hopefully Jim's got the phrasing correct now) and Spock gets all possessive and kills the flowers and any ardour the ambassador may have been habouring towards Jim. :-)
*the wooded glade incident totally doesn't count because no visible cocks were involved in the making of that scene.**
*cough* Re: fade to black - It's not my fault! There were deadlines and I had to make the hard (SO HARD) choice between plot and porn and I must've been drunk because plot won.
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 1nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:34:14 UTC
*** Jim emerges from their second meld with the same sense of ease as from their first. Only this time, when he leans up to press his lips against Spock's, he does it with the full knowledge that not only does he love, completely, absolutely, but he is loved in return.
It's headier than any drug.
Spock's fingers shift from the meld points to cradle the back of his head, keeping him in place as his dry, hot tongue slips out to trace the seam of Jim's lips, petitioning for entrance. Jim allows it, obviously, parting his lips on a groan. He's fully hard in seconds but Spock's tongue is tentative, almost too gentle for Jim and his months of pent-up longing. He wants everything Spock can give him. He wants it now, damn it. When he can feel it without the influence of some fucked up drug
( ... )
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 2nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:36:36 UTC
A slight increase of pressure is all the warning he gets before he's drawn completely into the blistering heat of the meld. This one is nothing like the first two, initiated to soothe and communicate, respectively. This time Spock's emotions are all around him, burning him with the intensity of his desire and his love and, yes, his physical need. It's like being thrown into a sea of pure sensation and Jim's perfectly willing to drown in it. How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.
Spock? he gasps, as the feedback continues to jolt through him. This isn't exactly helping the delay-Jim's-orgasm project.
Back in his quarters, Jim's body is writhing beneath Spock's. Needy moans are bubbling, completely unrestrained, from his throat and fuck he can feel it, there and in the meld. He can feel Spock's reactions all around him, and over him, and he can't separate anymore what's action and what's redoubled reflection. It's all good. So good
( ... )
Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 3nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:39:17 UTC
Spock arches an eyebrow at the command, but sits up and obliges with a quick yank. Later, maybe, Jim will teach him the art of the striptease, but tonight he's too greedy to bother. His fingers skim the trail of hair that teases the waist of Spock's pants, sliding through it as he explores the contours of Spock's abs before moving on to the jut of his hipbones. He keeps his touch light, teasing with just the tips of his fingers and the heels of his palms until he feels Spock twitch under them
( ... )
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 4nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:41:32 UTC
Spock's dick is perfect. Long, hot, hard. Green flushed skin stretches tight over it, glistening at the head where a drop of precome beads at the slit. Jim's mouth waters.
"I want to suck you," he says urgently. It's a struggle to look away from the thick vein that curls around Spock's cock, begging to be licked and sucked, but it's worth it to see Spock's eyebrows draw in tight and Spock's eyes go a little bit glassy.
"I-" Spock stutters. Spock never stutters. "I would enjoy that
( ... )
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 5nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:43:50 UTC
Jim uses every trick in his arsenal to make Spock fall apart. He swallows him down to the root and uses his entire tongue to massage the shaft as he works his way back up. He pins Spock's hips in place and then relaxes and lets him fuck his mouth, keeping him wet and covered at all times, with his lips or with his hands. He alternates between hard suction and fluttering kisses as he explores every single inch, occasionally nosing down into Spock's balls and licking behind them
( ... )
Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6nix_thisFebruary 13 2011, 12:45:01 UTC
Spock leans over Jim, fingers thrusting in and out at an easy pace. He catches Jim's bottom lip with his teeth and licks into his mouth, adding another finger only when Jim's bucking and moaning beneath him
( ... )
Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6nix_thisFebruary 14 2011, 04:29:14 UTC
Glad you like it! Thank You!
I'm going to clean it up and post it as a sextra rather than put it in the fic itself, but yeah.. Jim and Spock sexytimes are what makes life worth living :B
Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6rae1013February 13 2011, 16:10:04 UTC
FML! How many pairs of panties are you going to make me ruin? FFS! I can't quite cuss enough to surface from this pool of smut. This gloriously, delicious smut. But if you have to drown, drown in porn. UNF!
Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6awarringtonFebruary 15 2011, 14:19:01 UTC
Words cannot express my gratitude that you wrote this, for a number of different reasons...
First there's this: How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.Yes! So few people do it, but I love it when the writer acknowledges that Spock is one person on the outside (cool as a cucumber) and another on the inside (a bit of a maelstrom of stuff). So big bonus points for including this
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Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6nix_thisFebruary 16 2011, 02:40:44 UTC
*g* I'm so glad you liked it, and that it came at a good time (as previously mentioned there is no bad time to receive gift porn, but yeah, yay for good timing!)
I love Spock-as-walking-contradiction (Vulcans in general, but especially Spock) - it's one of the best things to play with in this fandom, this idea that all of their logic and impeccable control exists because they feel so incredibly deeply. It's like the flipside of the tragic misunderstood badboy, taken to the extreme. And who loves dichotomies? Izzit me? Izzit me? It most definitely is! :D
The rest of this is just to make me fall in love with you, isn't it? I mean, you can't praise me for originality, characterization and hotness and not expect there to be consequencesAnd I did see the review you left at the archive (haven't responded because work filters the archive and not LJ, which is odd because I read WAY MORE PORN on LJ than I do on the poor, wee archive (if only they knew.. XD) and I hate responding to reviews on my phone.) But, it made me laugh. I don't think
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I love your Jim's stream of consciousness as we hear his story of these events. And how besotted he is with Spock, but has no idea he's broken up with Uhura, and how Spock is all stoic with Jim, and looks after him and protects him, and Jim and Spock end up full of sex juice and go at it in a wooded glade and how Jim feels dreadful for what he thinks he's done, but it's okay because Spock puts him right and then sexytiems....uh...no, I just made that last bit up... because you did a fade to black for the next year, but I'll forgive, because it was such an awesome story, and who needs sex?*
I thought it was brilliant the Klingon ambassador being that Klingon (and hopefully Jim's got the phrasing correct now) and Spock gets all possessive and kills the flowers and any ardour the ambassador may have been habouring towards Jim. :-)
*the wooded glade incident totally doesn't count because no visible cocks were involved in the making of that scene.**
**I'm teasing, really! ;-)
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Jim emerges from their second meld with the same sense of ease as from their first. Only this time, when he leans up to press his lips against Spock's, he does it with the full knowledge that not only does he love, completely, absolutely, but he is loved in return.
It's headier than any drug.
Spock's fingers shift from the meld points to cradle the back of his head, keeping him in place as his dry, hot tongue slips out to trace the seam of Jim's lips, petitioning for entrance. Jim allows it, obviously, parting his lips on a groan. He's fully hard in seconds but Spock's tongue is tentative, almost too gentle for Jim and his months of pent-up longing. He wants everything Spock can give him. He wants it now, damn it. When he can feel it without the influence of some fucked up drug ( ... )
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Spock? he gasps, as the feedback continues to jolt through him. This isn't exactly helping the delay-Jim's-orgasm project.
Back in his quarters, Jim's body is writhing beneath Spock's. Needy moans are bubbling, completely unrestrained, from his throat and fuck he can feel it, there and in the meld. He can feel Spock's reactions all around him, and over him, and he can't separate anymore what's action and what's redoubled reflection. It's all good. So good ( ... )
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"I want to suck you," he says urgently. It's a struggle to look away from the thick vein that curls around Spock's cock, begging to be licked and sucked, but it's worth it to see Spock's eyebrows draw in tight and Spock's eyes go a little bit glassy.
"I-" Spock stutters. Spock never stutters. "I would enjoy that ( ... )
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I'm going to clean it up and post it as a sextra rather than put it in the fic itself, but yeah.. Jim and Spock sexytimes are what makes life worth living :B
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EXACTLY! What a way to go :D
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First there's this: How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.Yes! So few people do it, but I love it when the writer acknowledges that Spock is one person on the outside (cool as a cucumber) and another on the inside (a bit of a maelstrom of stuff). So big bonus points for including this ( ... )
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I love Spock-as-walking-contradiction (Vulcans in general, but especially Spock) - it's one of the best things to play with in this fandom, this idea that all of their logic and impeccable control exists because they feel so incredibly deeply. It's like the flipside of the tragic misunderstood badboy, taken to the extreme. And who loves dichotomies? Izzit me? Izzit me? It most definitely is! :D
The rest of this is just to make me fall in love with you, isn't it? I mean, you can't praise me for originality, characterization and hotness and not expect there to be consequencesAnd I did see the review you left at the archive (haven't responded because work filters the archive and not LJ, which is odd because I read WAY MORE PORN on LJ than I do on the poor, wee archive (if only they knew.. XD) and I hate responding to reviews on my phone.) But, it made me laugh. I don't think ( ... )
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