VF-Fic: Taking a Risk - Part 1

[ninnive]

Title: Taking a Risk - Part 1
Author: ninnive
Fandom: 'Viewfinder'-series by Yamane Ayano
Pairing: Asami x Takaba
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: vague spoilers for the entire series
Summary: Asami doesn't like the status quo and is determined to change it

Comments

ahhhhhh!!!!!

[dyoklako]

a pretty tense start but well worth the read. thank you for sharing. ^_~

will patiently wait for the next part. ^_^

[ninnive]

I originally intended this to be a fluffy oneshot for Valentine's Day, but Asami pulled out the metaphorical guns and overruled me ;)

well, it is good...

[dyoklako]

and i will eagerly wait what you will come up with from the, er, "subtle hints" that Asami-seme's gun pointed at you did. ^_~

[hisoka44]

AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!
Why'd you stop!?!? Oni! Akuma! ........you just like to torture us, right? ~__^;;

Thanks a lot for sharing this with us. Can't wait to read more! <3

P.S.: I really like the way you portrayed Asami! He sounds so.....'human', for lack of a better word.

[ninnive]

Me? Likes to torture you? Naah, I'd never do that! *hides whips and chains and pets you*
Sorry, this went into a totally different direction from what I thought it would. And of course I'm glad you liked Asami - I think he has to be human somewhere...
;)

[terrenea]

I agree with hisoka44, you've portrayed Asami to be more human and I like it! ^^
Can't wait for ch 2!

[ninnive]

Thanks for your comment! And Asami has to be human, he just has problems to show it ;)

[sirius_fasha]

noooooooo it was going all fluffy and asami just had to said THIS!!!!

"Then maybe you should go."

ARGHHHH. cant he be satisfied for a while?!!!!

I definitely love this!!! Can't wait for the update!!! Thanx a lot for sharing this!!! *hugs*

[ninnive]

*hugs*
And Asami isn't satisfied with half-baked things, he wants the whole package ;P

[kafuuma]

"I… I just wanted to stay. I don't really know why." : I always thought there is no need of words between them, hehe, for Asami to be so dominating and Takaba such a stubborn brat :p

I really enjoyed the beginning, OMG I thought Asami would f*ck Takaba in his sleep, and Takaba thinking it was a dream, mwahaha...But I guess it's impossible not to wake up, he ?

Arigatou *hugs*

[ninnive]

Well, if you look at Asami's style, Aki would definitely wake up ;)
Thanks for commenting!
*hugs back*