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VF-Fic: Moving

Aug 07, 2006 03:00

Title: Moving (continuation of Having (to ask))
Author: ninnive
Fandom: "Viewfinder"-Series by Yamane Ayano
Pairing: Asami x Takaba
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spoilers up to NT7
Summary: Takaba doesn't really ask for it, but gets it anyway

( Moving )

thinking, vf, fic

Comments 42

! lovingly_sadist August 7 2006, 02:34:32 UTC

awwwwwwwww! AAAWWWWWWWWWWW!
Thats to much! I can't take the pleasure! Ah...ah..Asamiiii!

okay I'm out of it now. that is such an awsome image. Takaba finally submiting. And This Paragraph:

"Shh…" Asami whispered into Takaba's mouth, catching the arms the other had pressed against his chest in one hand and pinning them down above his head. "Couldn't you give into me, Akihito? Just this once, without a fight…"

I died. Was resurrected. Then promptly reread, and died again.

ninnive August 7 2006, 02:40:51 UTC

But I don't like my readers dying!
*pouts*
*resurrects you*

I'm really glad you liked it (especially since this is the first sex scene I've ever written) :)

you posted! you posted! ^_^ dyoklako August 7 2006, 02:39:14 UTC

really nice but for one minor nitpick: Doesn't Asami-sama work at night? he owns a club and mostly conducts his meetings at that time. right?

still this was really nice. thank you.

ninnive August 7 2006, 02:44:44 UTC

Thanks!

And I guess Asami has very irregular work times. And right now in this story he doesn't really work in his club but doing... something else (which of course he could do at night, but I wanted Aki to have a sleepless night of thinking things through) ;P

yep. dyoklako August 7 2006, 03:03:43 UTC

gotcha. i just realized that in his line of work, he also has to adjust his schedule (especially if this is after NT) to meet with his contacts, clients and prospective VIP clients. ^_~

good job with the installment. will patiently wait for the next one. again, thanks for posting and the immediate reply. ^^

aoi_aka August 7 2006, 04:06:13 UTC

I clicked all your links until I got to the beginning! This was awesome!

Takaba finally gave in and Asami finally asked nicely. How sweet! I love it. Thanks for sharing. *goes to take a cold shower*

ninnive August 7 2006, 04:13:29 UTC

Thank you :)

sunflower1343 August 7 2006, 05:53:11 UTC

Do you have a post with all the chapters listed? I have a feeling I missed one, and am lazy and don't want to keep clicking backwards LOL. If you don't though I'll do just that.

I loved this chapter though. I love fics where they discover their love for each other. This is nicely written too. Thanks for posting more. :)

ninnive August 7 2006, 05:56:15 UTC

Thanks!
And all of the chapters are in my memories :)

sunflower1343 August 7 2006, 06:08:32 UTC

Thank you! I had missed *2* chapters. No wonder I was confused. XD I'm all caught up now though. :)

ergo_ego August 7 2006, 10:58:39 UTC

good, now if I somehow am attacked by zombies in my sleep I can die happy.

Thanks!

ninnive August 7 2006, 12:01:36 UTC

Zombies??! Must be another fandom...
;)

Glad you liked it!

ergo_ego August 8 2006, 08:25:12 UTC

Haha, one can't be too aware of the dangers! (Keep sticks handy, ok? Apparently that's one of the best ways to fend them off.) :P

PS: Do you know what would make me die happier (zombies and all)? A new chapter.

Just kidding, take your time, amigo! The chapters are worth the wait ^_^