VF-Fic: Moving

[ninnive]

Title: Moving (continuation of Having (to ask))
Author: ninnive
Fandom: "Viewfinder"-Series by Yamane Ayano
Pairing: Asami x Takaba
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spoilers up to NT7
Summary: Takaba doesn't really ask for it, but gets it anyway

Comments

[sasheenka]

AWWWW....so nice...

[ninnive]

Thanks!
:)

[rusalkaz]

YESSSSS! *_* New chapter! You made my day *sniff sniff* LOOOOOOVED IT! XDDDD

"I want… want you to do what a lover should…"
XDDD My my Aki-chan is good at retaliation suddenly XD Well done! ^_~

[ninnive]

Thanks!
And Aki had all the night to think about his retorts (and I didn't get that scene out of my head where Asami said that to Aki) ;)

[kashinosei]

the best part throughout, is all the kissing part. I like the way you wrote on Aki and Asami sama, the way they are so hungry for each other...they way they are tasting each other... their tougue and touching, groping.. surprisingly, i was drawn more into the kissing part...

great one^^

[ninnive]

Thanks :)
And the kissing part was the one I was most comfortable writing with, the rest made me blush (especially because I wrote it on the train...)

[kashinosei]

actually, i like the "foreplay", the urge, the need, the desire...
with Aki going well with Asami...

~~ look forward to more..^^

[sirius_fasha]

arghhhhh finally!!! finally!!! finally!!! THanx very very very much!!!!!*cries and sobs and wails and other similar terms*

owh.. owh... owh.. finally...i got to read the new chappy n finally.. owh... finally... owh... finally...NC-17 AxA from this series!!!! arghhhhhhh *dies happily but not contented bcoz she wanted to read more*

[ninnive]

*sternly forbids you to die*
*gives you St. John's wort-pills to calm you down* ;P

I'm glad you liked the sex!

[k_a_s_h_k_a]

^__^
that`s one of the chapters that a fangirl is waiting for in a series :P
especially that line:
Couldn't you give into me, Akihito? Just this once, without a fight…
*swoons*

still i wanna know what aki`s conclusions are so i`m waiting for the continuation ^__^

[ninnive]

*hands you the smelling salt*

And I'm not so sure that all of Aki's conclusions are actually true ;)