Comments | ninamusing: Relict (11/14?, DW, 9/J/R, Teen but on the rise)

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sahiya March 24 2009, 05:37:44 UTC

I'm very much enjoying this fic! Beautifully written with spot-on characterization and I can tell that when it heats up, it's going to be scorching. Awesome!

nina_ds March 24 2009, 13:54:41 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying and that the characters ring true - that's very important to me. In fact, there are a couple of places in here where they took over and said things I wasn't expecting!

Things are about to heat up.

honorh March 24 2009, 13:13:33 UTC

Oh, good Jack, calling him on his bullshit! If the Doctor were in any way consistent with his behavior--either always treating Rose as a child, or always treating her as the woman he desires--it wouldn't be so bad, but the way he's yanking her around isn't fair. At least Jack has played and been played by the best players in the galaxy, but it's not really fair to him, either. Get with the making of love, people!

As always, gorgeously told.

nina_ds March 24 2009, 14:03:28 UTC

Jack is the one seeing most clearly here, and he's got the standing to "call bullpucky". And will continue to do so, in his inimitable way.

Get with the making of love, people!

We're getting there! Although it's going to take a slight, but necessary detour on the way…

As always, gorgeously told.

Thank you so much. That means a great deal to me.

dragonmom64 March 25 2009, 22:03:28 UTC

Yay! It's back and better than ever! Jack is going to get through to the Doctor eventually...and then....look out!

ninamusing March 29 2009, 18:42:11 UTC

Thank you! Yeah - Jack's poking the tiger. He'll get what he wanted but not what he expected…

editrx March 26 2009, 00:56:52 UTC

I am so glad to see another chapter from you. So beautiful, and such gorgeous characterization and dialogue.

ninamusing March 29 2009, 18:43:13 UTC

Thank you very much! I wish I had more time to work on this, but I am working on the next chapter now. We're getting to the nub of the matter now. I appreciate the encouragement, it keeps me going!

dark_aegis March 26 2009, 23:15:18 UTC

*squees* That was great! I love Jack taking the Doctor to task and all the little things the TARDIS did to make things easier for them. I can't wait for the next installment :)

ninamusing March 29 2009, 18:44:26 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! I'm over a week behind on LJ now, but I'm feeling more like writing than checking back through ?=skip580. I may regret it later, but I actually woke up with Jack just about yelling in my ear in a dream.