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need a beta reader
hi,im french,so english is not my first language.so i need a beta who would like to beta my story for me!a about one tree hill (peyton/brooke).my story is already written,for now i just have one chapter!!so please help me -
chapter9:meeting with Effy
Chapter 9: Meeting with Effy
Six weeks now and Effy still hadn't talked to any of her friends except Katie. Her mum didn't know where she was and Effy didn't even care because her mum had hurt her enough and it wasn't like her mum was worried about her. She never called her daughter to ask her if ( Read more... ) -
chapter8:i know where she is
Chapter 8:I know where she is
The sun was flashing from her window on her face; she groaned angrily and put the sheets over her face. She was staying at a hotel; around the room there was bottles of alcohol and some drugs on the table. She was completely a mess, and she was drinking and partying like a ( Read more... ) -
chapter7:where's Effy
Chapter 7: Where’s Effy?
It had been one week since the fight and the break up with Naomi. No one had see Effy since. She wasn’t at school or anything and everyone was worried about her.
“Dammit! Does anyone over here know where Effy is? I went to her house and her mum told me she hadn't ( Read more... ) -
chapter6:fight and break up
Chapter 6: Fight and break up
Effy stopped crying after she threw Emily out of her house; she was so hurt by what her best friend told her. She took a big sip from the bottle of Vodka and took a puff from her spliff. Fifteen minutes later, Effy was really drunk; she heard a big knock from the ( Read more... ) -
Chapter 5:bad day
Chapter 5:bad day
When Emily got to her house, she ran to her room and started to cry on her bed. She didn't notice that her sister was there and cried louder. Katie was confused why Emily was crying, but she knew one thing: if she was crying, that meant she had a fight with Naomi, but why? ( Read more... ) -
chapter 4:the break
chapter 4:the break
“I-i can't do this...we can't do this,” Emily said, pushing Effy away from her and reaching for her t-shirt.
“Why? What's the big deal?” Effy asked with a nervous smile.
“I can't Effy, I'm with Naomi and I love her not you...you're just my best friend, that's it. Nothing more ( Read more... ) -
chapter 3:Out of control
Chapter 3:Out of control
After she calmed herself, Effy was feeling a little bit better but she was still hurt, sad and angry with her friends, and more than that, she was upset with herself. She was sitting in front of her locker drawing something when a girl passed beside her and kicked her ( Read more... ) -
Chapter 2:Worry about her
Chapter 2:Worry about her
It was 7 am in the morning. Katie went home and Emily crashed at Naomi's house. As for Effy, she was too high and drunk to move so she passed out at Freddie's house.
Naomi opened her eyes slowly, feeling the alcohol in her blood again. ( Read more... ) -
Chapter 1:Party time!
Chapter 1:Party time!
Emily was sitting in her kitchen with Naomi, Effy and Katie. They decided to meet here before they left for Freddie's party. Effy and Katie said they don't want to go because of what happened between them, but Emily told them that it doesn't matter now; they have to enjoy the night anD forget about were talking the bell rang ( Read more... )