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A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes One to Five

Sep 28, 2009 11:56

Title: A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes One to Five
Author: nikki4noo
Beta: aquila-star and the lovely Anna
Word Count: 7,326
Rating: R (now the rating starts to be upped!)
Pairings/Characters: Kirk/McCoy, Joanna McCoy and various OCs
Summary: Bones finds himself in the predicament of being engaged, to THE Captain James T Kirk. How to get out ( Read more... )

series: rascally verse, joanna, rating: r, fanfic, kirk-mccoy, star trek

Comments 28

pixelmayhem September 28 2009, 03:21:03 UTC

Mmm waterfights, and pseudo-breakfasts and suits. Oh no (oh yes!) Starfleet is on them how will this change things ;) And another mmm at suits and intimate whispers. *wiggles happily*

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 03:28:52 UTC

Joanna is a sneaky, cheeky little girl!

I know, suits on those two boys, how can either of them resist each other? Really?

Well Starfleet has done well at "managing" Kirk and Bones up to this point in their life ;) I think the boys will have a few tricks up their own sleeves.

caitri September 28 2009, 03:37:37 UTC

I love this series! Poor Jim having to change with Bones right there!

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 03:42:42 UTC

My own personal fanon is that they shared a dorm room together for three years (they are sitting in the same row at the 'hearing' and also report to the hanger in the same dorm/barracks grouping). So, Jim would have had to change in front of him many times, but yes, now is a wee bit different ;)

Only two more parts to go :(

captain_fine September 28 2009, 04:11:56 UTC

Love it! I can't wait for more. Just imagining Jim in that suit...WOW! I'm sending you hugs right now for indulging all of us with a lovely dose of GQMFiness. <33333

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 04:17:22 UTC

You want pics of Jim in the suit? I can provide... The two suits are based on ones that are out there already. The boys are FIIIINNNNEEEEE!

I loves hugs! XD

captain_fine September 28 2009, 20:44:30 UTC

Yes, please! I need some gorgeous Chris and Karl to drool over. :)

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 22:21:54 UTC

I added an author's note at the end of the fic above with links. Enjoy!

swing_set13 September 28 2009, 05:05:25 UTC

LOVED IT!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 05:12:46 UTC

XD Tomorrow is all you have to wait until. Only two parts left.

swing_set13 September 28 2009, 05:20:05 UTC

AWESOME! CAN'T WAIT. YOU DID SUCH AN AMAZING JOB WITH THIS PROMPT! *FLAILS ARMS*

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 05:37:22 UTC

Aww thank you so much, it just kinda "spoke" to me. My main beta told me at the end of the story that she wanted it to be longer. It's finished damn it! Although I might play around in this universe again at some stage.

weepingnaiad September 28 2009, 05:25:34 UTC

Oh, what a lovely update! I loved them playing in the water, it was so familiar and warm, but I think of that afternoon the scene of Jo and Jim reading on the bed together? That was simply wonderful! And I adored how insightful Jim is.

The suits? GUH. Those two... that had to be decidedly difficult for them to be so restrained. Can't imagine what's going on in Bones' mind now that Starfleet is involved, but can't wait to find out!

Really wonderful!

nikki4noo September 28 2009, 05:35:07 UTC

Jim has a bit of insight very much into kids that might be putting up a front. Takes one to know one ;)

Well, the boys will have a surprise waiting for them when they get back to the house.