Fic: Pranksters - Third Year (part b)

May 05, 2012 11:09

Title: Pranksters - Third Year (part b)
Beta: dizilla and aquila_star
Rating: R
Word Count: 6,224 (overall 23,000)
Pairings/Characters: Kirk/McCoy, Chapel, OMCs, OFCs, Enterprise crew (mentioned)
Warnings: bad language, innuendo and a whole lot of pranks going on
Disclaimer: Not mine, dammit!

Summary:The legendary and epic prank war of 2257-2258 by cadets Kirk and ( Read more... )

rating: r, fanfic, kirk-mccoy, star trek, pranksters

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treksnoopy May 5 2012, 04:22:03 UTC
*applauds wildly*

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nikki4noo May 16 2012, 04:18:18 UTC
*cursties*

Thank you, m'dear

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mijan May 5 2012, 06:20:14 UTC
That was fun. And yes, I liked the ending. :)

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nikki4noo May 16 2012, 04:18:42 UTC
:D Glad you enjoyed it.

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sickbay23 May 5 2012, 11:33:07 UTC
that was such a fun to me, it's unbelievable that two grown ups can do such pranks, but i loved it. You've done a really god job, i also liked the end too.

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nikki4noo May 16 2012, 04:24:13 UTC
Thank you.

It is canon in TOS about Bones being such a prankster in college and still having a fondness for them. I was trying to show the development of their friendship through the pranks, so I hope that worked.

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kilala10 May 7 2012, 00:24:28 UTC
LOVE! loveloveloveloveloveLOVE! I cannot express how much LOVE I have for this story!!! Great ending! :3

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nikki4noo May 16 2012, 04:24:45 UTC
Oh, thank you! *blushes*

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jachelle0627 May 10 2012, 03:20:18 UTC
Fabulous story! My favorite part, other than the happy ending of course, was when Chapel was watching Jim and Bones play pool and noticing their very strong, but well-hidden attraction to the other. I was grinning so wide the whole time. I really liked how you changed things up a bit with each prank - sometimes showing the planning of the prank, sometimes just describing the prank itself and sometimes using an outsiders point of view - very clever way of keeping things interesting.

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nikki4noo May 16 2012, 04:28:37 UTC
Thank you.

I didn't quite twig that is what I was doing at the time, hee. I just tried to set each one out appropriate for the prank. I had picked them first, put them in the order they were going to happen and then let the story evolve organically to show the growth of their friendship and then something a little more (this was originally supposed to be gen/friendship only!).

My beta's did mention that the Chapel section was quite long and did focus a bit on her, but I liked being in her head, seeing how she had gotten to Starfleet and then how that would affect how she saw the two boys. I do also love the Uhura pov one as well. Gaila is just way too much fun.

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