Comments | nikita79x: New Fic: Once More: Consequences Pt. 5/5

nikita79x

New Fic: Once More: Consequences Pt. 5/5

May 14, 2010 01:20

Phew, finally done and I fixed previous mistakes in earlier parts so it'll be better on the yahoo group when I post it. Hope you enjoy it!!
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once more sequel, fanfic, reboot, story, star trek, slash

Comments 6

treksnoopy May 15 2010, 16:22:10 UTC

Hi!!! Can you add tags? Pretty please?
I'm having trouble fiding all the parts....

nikita79x May 16 2010, 05:07:52 UTC

So sorry about that - I'm good with tags on my other blogs, but here it's a little harder. I'll do you one better - links in order on my next post. ;)

syredronning May 20 2010, 22:45:53 UTC

Hi there :) Got this story in an open tab for quite a while, and am still unsure what to say.

I really liked the beginning of it all, SpockPrime and McCoy getting together - I've got a soft spot for this particular Reboot pairing :) I was curious how it would play out on the Enterprise and liked all their interaction.

However, I think I've tired a little out with classic h&c so the development from pt. 3 on left me hanging, and their meeting again here in this part left it rather open too and somehow unsatisfying for me. Sorry for that :/

nikita79x May 21 2010, 20:56:13 UTC

Well that's an honest comment - and considering this fic doesn't get much of any comments I suppose others either agree, don't care to read it, or possibly just decided to lurk ( ... )

syredronning June 9 2010, 15:14:31 UTC

So... I've reread this whole thing now. And I'm baffled by the ending that feels like the middle to me. There is so much unresolved. nuSpock's feelings of jealousy, SpockPrime and nuSpock's confrontation, McCoy moving past this. Jim figuring out how to deal. None of that has occurred. So I guess people are confused by your intent to end it here. I get that the intent is to keep people from being frustrated with a lack of updating. But I myself am more frustrated by the lack of resolution. I think I'd prefer to know that you are still thinking about the story... that there is still a chance of more in this verse... that someday there will be some sort of ending to this wrenching story. Your story grabbed me in the beginning, kept me wanting more, evoked feelings, kept me wanting more. I do sincerely hope that you change your mind and continue adding to it as you see fit.

nikita79x June 9 2010, 21:47:31 UTC

I would like to continue the story. Truth is, so few comments or interest in the story kind of made me tuck it aside for now. Really, fanfic writers live for comments and some kind of positive feedback that there are at least a few people enjoying the story. Kind of deflates your ego when it gets maybe 3 or 4 comments. Having one more comment, even anon does help, though. Thanks.