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shoshana_m January 27 2010, 02:02:51 UTC

I figured McCoy would stop him, but I didn't see
it coming he would be in the shuttle.

A suicidal Spock. So sad. Could see why, though. :(
(Easier to see a suicidal Spock than a suicidal
Jim or Bones.)

A 20th C. Georgian/American would be very unlikely to use "bloody" as a cuss word. But I thought about this, and it makes sense
23rd c. Standard would incorporate vocabulary from a variety of English (and non-English) dialects. And it's certainly an appropriate curse word for a doctor! I hereby reserve the right to use it sometime myself if
I am writing a cursing Bones.

Looking forward to the next part. And wondering how/why
they're (presumably) together next time .

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nikita79x January 27 2010, 07:54:51 UTC
Thank you for your feedback, I think languages change and alter with time and he might very well say bloody - I say it sometimes. But I decided to change it anyway to more standard McCoy speak. I am now posting part four and the final chapter. I am thinking of a sequel which would deal also with reboot spock and his discovery of the bond. I just can't get it out of my head wondering how he'd handle it.

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