I need a "Skywarp is Annoying" icon...

[nightwind69]

So I have this humanized TF "story" that's in my head. I've posted bits of it here in the journal. But it's not like I can really call it a story because...well, it isn't a story. At best, it's a series of vignettes. It has no plot. I have no idea how the TFs became humans other than "Goddidit." (Which I can live with, actually; it's no more far-

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Would this do?

[ravenclaw_devi]

Re: Would this do?

[nightwind69]

That does nicely, thanks! :D *swipes*

*nervously awaits comments*

Re: Would this do?

[ravenclaw_devi]

Awwww, no need to be nervous! On that note, please take what I'm going to say below as an "I" statement, not as a put-down of you as a writer (let alone you as a person!).

So Starscream broke his hand on Skywarp's face? Served him right. :D

I must say that this ficbit made me uncomfortable. Of course, if you meant for it to be uncomfortable, you've succeeded well

pt.II

[ravenclaw_devi]

Now that I've said so much about TC's attitude in this, I should say something about Skywarp's... what struck me was that human!Skywarp is pretty much just sitting there with ineffectual anger. Of course, it's understandable, given that they're so new to those bodies, but... it's like zie's still Skywarp inside and wanting to do the things that Skywarp can do and pouting at "her" situation, but not doing much else. And I'm like, okay, she's physically smaller and weaker than TC now, but physical strength is not the only strength there is. So, I'm just wondering when Skywarp's strength will come out. (Unless it already does and I'm overlooking something

[nightwind69]

Glad you liked, 'Wench. :) It is a fun story...thing...whatever. :) All these experiences that would be so darned weird for them... I love messing with minds. ;)

[ravenclaw_devi]

Well, they are an old married couple. ;)