HP - If You Only Knew

Dec 17, 2008 22:46

Title: If You Only Knew
Rating: Teen
Characters: Remus, Sirius
Genre: Angst
Warnings: None
Word Count: 632
Summary: "It is 4:03 in the morning and Remus can’t sleep."

Author's Note: Inspired by the song If You Only Knew by Shinedown. {lyrics}

If You Only Knew )

character: hp: remus "moony" lupin, category: gen: woe is me, 'ship: hp: remus/sirius, rating: teen, timeline: hp: first gen, character: hp: sirius "padfoot" black, length: 501-1500, 'verse: harry potter

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city_speak December 19 2008, 01:56:22 UTC
Wow, this is great. Sweet and a little sad and I can imagine it perfectly. It's exactly how I like to imagine them.

Beautiful ... And Shinedown's pretty great, huh? :]

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remuslives23 March 5 2009, 12:07:24 UTC
That whole paragraph where they embrace is just perfection, but this...

So he clings to Sirius at night and knows that as long as they’re together, they’ll live to see the morning.

...is simply heaven!

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cherie_morte March 5 2009, 17:36:16 UTC
This had excellent imagery. The atmosphere was palpable, I felt like *I* was the one lying up in bed worrying. Which is pretty impressing, if you ask me. Great work!

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