Fic: Identity

Jun 06, 2010 02:10

Title: Identity
Author: nighthawkms
Genre: Fluff!
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some angst, bit of language
Chapter Pairing: Steve/Tony
Summary: Tony's been spending a lot of time in the lab with Iron Man lately... Steve's curious as to why.
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of Marvel and their respective creators. I don't own them, I'm just playing in the ' ( Read more... )

steve/tony, marvel, public

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mostepotente June 6 2010, 06:29:27 UTC
Crikeys that is a LOT of dialogue. Seeing it in LJ format just puts into perspective (again).

I love the fic, but then you already knew that.

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nighthawkms June 6 2010, 06:30:56 UTC
Jesus I was just about to send you the link but you beat me to it. Are you stalking my LJ now? xD

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mostepotente June 6 2010, 06:33:37 UTC
I am like a gdamn ninja in your LJ. Commenting on your stuff.

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nighthawkms June 6 2010, 06:38:31 UTC
Yeah, it's not like it's surprising. You know what would be surprising? You changing your LJ pic! I swear I don't even remember anymore who the fuck that guy is. Isn't he the weird priest from Dirty Sexy Money who sleeps with like everyone?

SURPRISE ME, NINJA :P Or I will forever associate you with a slightly drunk looking white dude.

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cat_13145 June 6 2010, 07:12:57 UTC
Good fic.
It's nice to see another fan of the dialogue fic here. Most people don't like it, but if it's well written (like this one) it can be very good.

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nighthawkms June 6 2010, 15:00:43 UTC
Glad you liked! I've never done dialogue-only before but I was up for a challenge :)

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Too much dialogue jazzypom June 6 2010, 07:46:58 UTC
It really made the fic hard to follow, as there was no setting (or if it was, it was lost under the crush of words) to play off at all.

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Re: Too much dialogue nighthawkms June 6 2010, 15:03:07 UTC
Yeah, that's the problem with dialogue-only, it's usually hit or miss b/c of that. Sorry ya didn't like, I'll be going back to regular format for any future fics so hopefully those will be more to your taste :)

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glasgowsmiles June 6 2010, 08:26:23 UTC
I enjoyed this. People's dialogue was unique enough to themselves that I didn't get lost reading it, and I do enjoy the occasional all-dialogue fic. And I like Steve-learns-Tony-is-Iron Man fics.

And, you know, anything where Steve and Tony kiss.

So yay!

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nighthawkms June 6 2010, 15:03:39 UTC
Glad you liked! Steve and Tony kissing is always a plus ;)

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cyjaneczka October 19 2010, 17:46:36 UTC
I like Steve-learns-Tony-is-Iron Man fics, too! xD ok basically they are my favourite fics xD lol so I liked this cute fic too :3 and well, duh... I really love lots of good dialogue :D

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dictionary00 June 6 2010, 10:36:40 UTC
(Here via cap_ironman)

Love it! I had a silly grin on my face the whole way through. I have a special weakness for dialogue-only fics because it feels like I'm listening in, and if done well (like you did here) the format adds a lot of intimacy.

Re: canon, I think that Spider-Man only became involved with the Avengers in the 2000s, a long time after Tony revealed his identity to the Avenger team. (Someone with more Avengers knowledge please verify this?)

Or you could just put this in the wishy-washy 616 space that "Iron Man vs Whiplash" seems to have fallen into.

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nighthawkms June 6 2010, 15:05:34 UTC
Glad you liked! And thanks for the canon info, I'll look it up and know better for next time!

Hehe I don't even know if it qualifies for 616 anymore with Samuel "motherfucking" Jackson's Nick Fury =D

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