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Fic: Growing Up Dorian: 7/7

Oct 18, 2009 19:46

Title: Growing Up Dorian
Chapter: 7
Author: nighthawkms (beta'd by mostepotente
Genre: Future!Fic, Possibly AU
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slash, Obscenities, Angst, Character Death
Chapter Pairing:(s) Click to be Spoiled: ( Spoilers! )

alternate reality, jd/cox, scrubs, public, fanfiction

Comments 7

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nighthawkms October 19 2009, 04:52:27 UTC

The part about this being one of your fave future fics makes me squee, and I'm glad to hear that at least one person will tune in for the companion piece! ^_^

popsongnation October 19 2009, 13:30:58 UTC

That was perfect. Really perfect.I giggled like mad when they were talking in the van.
And the ending...they're one big happy family now. It's so cute (in my head, that's whats going to happen eventually).
Definitely going to read the companion fic. I'm already looking forward to it.

absrip October 25 2009, 23:31:22 UTC

Oh this was such a wonderful new take on the whole JD/Cox relationship. The children were adoreble and everything felt so believeable and well written. You almost had me crying one time. Very heartwarming story, thank you so much for sharing:)

tomodachikiss October 28 2009, 02:03:39 UTC

YAY! I absolutely want that other piece of fiction! :-) I almost SAW the whole scene with Cox and Newbie in front of my inner Eye. The Emotions and storyline were 100% believable. I guess, that is EXACTLY what should have happened in the real canon :-) (Except in my version Jordan dies a lot earlier - even if I adore her...)
I was SO feeling sorry for Cox falling in love with JD, THAN losing Jordan (whom he also loved) ESCAPING to JD, having to keep silent about it for years for the kid's sakes and continueing to be in love with Johnny. When Perry tried to explain this to Jenny I almost cried... you know, in the car.

What also absolutely devastating was, is the fact that Perry and JD seemed "cold" to each other after this "night" happened. Must've killed them both. Did Perry ever tell JD that he felt the same, but couldn't do anything about it because of Jordan? Like he explained to Jenny in the car?

I just decided I want that fanfiction made in a movie :) With the original actors!
I will definetely be checking your LJ for updates.

clear_chicken June 15 2010, 13:40:36 UTC

I really loved this though there was so much that got missed because of the POV. I must say I really wanted to know what Jenny thought when she realised she was named after JD. I also thought the time skips may have been a bit far apart. But I did love reading it. Well done. Did you write the companion piece?