Title: Growing Up Dorian Chapter: 4 Author: nighthawkms (beta'd by mostepotente Genre: Future!Fic, Possibly AU Chapter Rating: PG-13 Warnings: Slash, Obscenities, Angst, Character Death Chapter Pairing:(s) Click to be Spoiled: ( Spoilers! )
Excellent as always. I really like the bickering scene between Jack and Jenny, because well... it's cute and Jack being able to pass as Perry on the phone is funny.
Nice way to do adolescent angst without gettin' all adolescent on me.
Don't worry about not having seen Sam and Jenny getting together, I left the beginning of this fic a bit ambiguous on purpose. I think when I started brain storming I had Sam dating Izzy :D And I could've made him gay, but when I shaped it out I saw Sam spending the most time with Jenny cause of their age similarity, even if Turk and JD would be disappointed about that ;) (Alright Turk would be disappointed but JD would secretly be like OMG I can hang out with Dr. Cox more now!)
Evil evil cliffhanger....but I don't believe you'll kill J.D. because a)somebody would kill YOU and b)because you wouldn't do it.Would you? (oh god...)I think as soon as Perry hears of it he will be on JDs side.That'll be the end of their not-speaking-thing *cheers*.Because they'll realize that life is to short to not speak to the one you love (okay, now I'm beeing cheesy...). Also, Jack sounding like Perry on the phone FTW AND Sam and Jenny getting together NOBODY saw that coming *sarcasm* No, really I knew he wouldn't be gay...don't know why, just knew. Okay, and one last thing in BOLD letters:PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE I CAN'T WAIT!!! Love this.
I'm not telling whether I kill off JD or not :P HAH. And I'm sure not everyone caught onto Jenny and Sam, I could've gone for the OMG BEST FRIENDS FOREVER angle and left it at that ;P. Don't worry, next chapter is coming soon!
Comments 6
Excellent as always. I really like the bickering scene between Jack and Jenny, because well... it's cute and Jack being able to pass as Perry on the phone is funny.
Nice way to do adolescent angst without gettin' all adolescent on me.
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Glad you're enjoying this!
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Also, Jack sounding like Perry on the phone FTW
AND Sam and Jenny getting together NOBODY saw that coming *sarcasm* No, really I knew he wouldn't be gay...don't know why, just knew.
Okay, and one last thing in BOLD letters:PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE I CAN'T WAIT!!!
Love this.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment