Can't we Pretend?

[nightbaron079]

Title:Can't we Pretend?
Pairing: MomoTaro (Tsugunaga Momoko x Morimoto Ryutaro)
Notes: This fic is a first in the [Stars] series, part of my birthday writing self-challenge. Credits to [Hotaru no Hikari 2] Episode 2 for being a big help in inspiring me in this story :)
Summary:Stars are up there for a reason, just as all people live in this world

Comments

[aoiaoidesu]

1st, YOU'RE SO CLICHE AS USUAL. Try to be less cliche, IDK.

Anyway, your take at Morimochan is interesting♥ Heh, he listens to class huh XD Momo is so cute *o* She's so adorable and so, so cute~

Fuuu, stars. Momo's words are so nice (and I wanted to hit Morimochan in the head).

"Sorry for being... such an insensitive kid, Good to know you understand, Morimochan. ;_; You sound so insensitive here *o*

OH AND HIS THOUGHT WHILE GOING THERE WAS PURE KYUN.

[aoiaoidesu]

Obviously I'm on crack. And has no sleep. Sorry for the weird comment.

Oh and Yacchan desu.

MOMOTARO SHALL LIVE FOREVER~! /oh!

[nightbaron079]

It's okay. We're probably in the same situation xD

LOL wakateruyo~

LOL I need to pimp them more. But I need to skill up if I want them to have a bigger, more accepting audience xD

THEY SHALL LIVE FOREVER AND EVER YAAAAAY \o/

[nightbaron079]

First, LOL I told you I'll fail this because I am sleep-deprived and unable to think clearly xD

Why, he looks like an okay student~ And Momo is forever cute like that. i can so imagine her voice talking here xD

Heehee, this is the first of the stars series♥~ :3 I hope I can be less cliche x.x I want awesome dialogue-writing skills T^T /is despairing for my fail :(

Momo's words are nice ne~ (please do so, make it two, one for me xD)

He understands and more. But he really didn't know~ it wasn't his fault~

YAY FAVORITE PART WHILE WRITING♥~

Thanks for reading and commenting♥~

[nuitecarlate]

D'awww. this is so sweet :3 Plus, you know that I am super biased with MomoTaro. :">

This fic made me miss Ryuu more D: But anyway, you write so well, HOW CAN YOU DO IT?! O.O /bows down

I love how this fic seem to be sweet and optimistic, but I weirdly sense angst. dajfjkad There's a part of me that suddenly died down when I reached the last part of this fic xD :'>

Great job, as always! ♥

I MISSED YOU IN LJ♥~

[nightbaron079]

Yay for MomoTaro biasedness♥~ xDDD

I miss Ryuu too♥~ :( This one fails, actually xD But thank you~ /bows down to YOUR awesomeness. Write more fics~

LOL yay there IS implied angst xD Momo is crying anyways xD Awww yay♥~

Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars?
I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now~

Thank you Kaichou♥~ though it looks like I coerced you into commenting xD But really, even if it's just PMP who reads my works I'm oddly satisfied :)

NOW WRITE MEGABU FANFICS AND SHOW THE WORLD YOUR AWESOMENESS♥~