GK fic...ish?: Burning Bright

Feb 01, 2011 20:37

Two things in one week? Madness! Although writing this was, as I said to passionofmind, like trying to put a cat into a coffee cup. Possibly a sign I should not stop writing for so long. Also WWII AU yay!

Title: Burning Bright
Author: nightanddaze
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Colbert/Nate
Word Count: 2383
Summary: Burning the evidence. WWII AU.
Notes: Written for Porn Battle ( Read more... )

wwii au, porn, generation kill, writing

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amberlynne February 2 2011, 01:57:20 UTC
I don't think I have mentioned this before but I LOOOOOOOOVE THEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEM! AND YOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!

I love that Nate actually gets the jump on Colbert for once and then Colbert totally admits that he studies Nate and notices things and awwwwwwww NATE REMEMBERS EVERY TIME!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Aww icon! <#

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nightanddaze February 2 2011, 16:21:59 UTC
I don't think I have mentioned this before but I LOOOOOOOOVE THEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEM! AND YOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!

I don't think so. Not yet. It is nice to hear it.

I love that Nate actually gets the jump on Colbert for once and then Colbert totally admits that he studies Nate and notices things and awwwwwwww NATE REMEMBERS EVERY TIME!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Well, they try.

:3

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pjvilar February 2 2011, 02:14:44 UTC
The complexity of the world and the relationship are amazing, more amazing still how you've developed and grown it across all the fics in this AU while retaining a consistent core. This had me all swoony and I love this and them and you. &hearts

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nightanddaze February 2 2011, 16:37:30 UTC
The complexity of the world and the relationship are amazing, more amazing still how you've developed and grown it across all the fics in this AU while retaining a consistent core.

Thank you! And to be honest, I'm kind of surprised I've been so consistent. I seem to have some kind of freaky fic-only recall ability that allows me to remember wtf has already happened and when. Too bad this is not a talent that applies to other areas of my life though.

This had me all swoony and I love this and them and you. ♥

&hearts &hearts &HEARTS

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dana_knockouts February 2 2011, 03:20:22 UTC
Your writing is so lovely!

I really love the way you incorporate cannon so naturally, that part about the ring broke my heart.

I'm so glad you've written more for this universe. It seems like this fic is really pivotal for both of them.

I'm really glad you posted tonight.

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nightanddaze February 2 2011, 16:44:57 UTC
Your writing is so lovely!

Thank you :)

I'm so glad you've written more for this universe. It seems like this fic is really pivotal for both of them.

I think it was. It started off as just porn, but then the letter got mixed in there and it got kind of important.

<3

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dana_knockouts February 2 2011, 18:16:24 UTC
The porn you write is never 'just' porn.

Rest assured. All your porn is important.

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fosfomifira February 2 2011, 06:38:05 UTC
You don't want to know the noises I made when I saw this on my flist. Or maybe you're curious like that.

My love for this AU is knows no bounds. This is so good. There's so much detail here, all the hints at M. Colbert's more than somewhat troubled past. I love how Nate has grown and while he's still something of an innocent, he's coming up with his own sense of right and wrong and who he is.

There's something very realistic about them not knowing much about each other. At first Nate was all in awe of Colbert and while he's more confident now, he's still too polite or something to go around asking questions. And Monsieur Colbert wouldn't open himself to interrogation, either.

I just want to see more of this because I love it so.

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nightanddaze February 2 2011, 16:59:17 UTC
You don't want to know the noises I made when I saw this on my flist. Or maybe you're curious like that.

Haha, if you let me imagine them then they are probably soooo much more strange than the reality.

My love for this AU is knows no bounds. This is so good.

<3

There's something very realistic about them not knowing much about each other.

Agreed. Politeness aside, their time is generally limited and Colbert is kind of shady, so everything is revealed in tiny bits, if ever.

I just want to see more of this because I love it so.

It's been so long. I have missed this story.

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alethialia February 2 2011, 08:32:29 UTC
Gah, GORGEOUS. With the ash and the letter and the smoking hot porn.

“You have a sister?” he asks, still thinking of London, California and one single letter.

Colbert raises his eyebrows and removes his cigarette from his mouth. With his open collar and his fallen hair he looks rakish, like a film star.

“Sometimes,” he says, opening the door for Nate. “Sometimes I even have two.”

I love you so fucking much. OMG.

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nightanddaze February 2 2011, 16:51:12 UTC
Gah, GORGEOUS. With the ash and the letter and the smoking hot porn.

Aw, thank you. Thank god for PB, reminding me how much I have NOT written WWIIAU.

I love you so fucking much. OMG.

Sexy film star Colbert and I love you back. Oh, and baby Nate too.

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