Journeys (3e/5)

[night_spear1287]

Title: Journeys (Table of Contents)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Nothing you recognize is mine. I gain nothing of material value from this.
Part I a b Part II a b c d Part III a b c d

Comments

[sg_fignewton]

Wait. Wait.

Daniel lost his memory of Abydos, or Abydos is lost?

Evil, evil woman, you. But oooh, painfully and powerfully written.

[night_spear1287]

Well, I guess it wouldn't be my writing without a bit of pain :)

[donahermurphy]

I don't think I commented on this part yet- you did a very, very good job. I especially liked the interaction with Teal'c (partially becuase it didn't break my heart, and I wasn't mentally envisioning how horrible everything could go. (Daneil told Anubis about Earth? Even though he has a plan, it's the kind of plan that's a little disturbing to me... it IS kind of arrogant, but maybe thats the only kind of plan that would actually work

[night_spear1287]

Yup, I definitely think that a certain arrogance and rashness of Daniel's actions is something his friends keep in check--in "Full Circle," after all, canon!Daniel accidentally got Abydos blown up and handed the Eye of Ra to Anubis, and my!Daniel has arguably even more of a personal stake in the attack on Abydos. I tend to write the members of SG-1 as being competent individuals but with flaws that could overwhelm their efforts if they were on their own, so that it's not until they're on SG-1--balancing and checking each other--that they reach their full hero potential. That's how I see them, anyway :)

The Teal'c scenes were lots of fun--his relationship with mini!Daniel (as a drill sergeant, mentor, confidant, and combat buddy) is probably as central to this series as any other relationship.

Thanks for your comments! I'm glad you liked it. The next update should be up...either tonight or early tomorrow :)