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Fic: Closer

Nov 29, 2011 23:28

Author: night_n_sky
Title: Closer
Beta: willow_10
Characters: Ten/Rose
Rating: Fluff, romance
Word Count: 1.430
Summary: The Doctor gets closer and closer to telling Rose what he feels for her, but keeps on drawing back. But what if Rose took the first step?
Disclaimer: I don't own the Doctor or Rose or any other Doctor Who character. They're just sitting here in my ( Read more... )

romance, doctor who, ten/rose, fluff

Comments 16

tracy_lousia November 30 2011, 00:10:54 UTC

Lovely, perfectly written and very fluffy. Thanks.

night_n_sky November 30 2011, 16:17:27 UTC

Thank you! Means a lot x

sparkling eyes... willow_10 November 30 2011, 02:25:26 UTC

This. Is. Beautiful. I love the pacing of the story, the way the Doctor is dancing around the situation of his feelings and (maybe/I wish/but shouldn't presume) Rose's feelings. And Rose's character is also more outspoken than in your last story, good work ( ... )

Re: sparkling eyes... night_n_sky November 30 2011, 16:42:32 UTC

*give Willow a huge hug* Thank you soooooo much for the lovely comment and advice, hehe! I'm a fast learner ;)

I corrected the cheeky mistakes. Thanks! And I wanted to say 'ontkennen'... not sure how to write it so any help is welcome.

Thanks again, it means a lot! I'll try to write as many fics as possible. I'll grab pen and paper from the moment I have new images in my mind!!

xx

Re: sparkling eyes... willow_10 December 1 2011, 21:05:43 UTC

Well I think I figured out why "I can't deny my heart" sounded so weird to me. Just translate it. "Ik kan mijn hart niet ontkennen". I have never heard that being said before, in either language. I have heard, however, "I can't deny my feelings/what I feel." or "I can't deny the truth." or (as Galadriel said:) "I cannot deny that my heart has greatly desired this..." :p ( ... )

Re: sparkling eyes... night_n_sky December 1 2011, 21:40:35 UTC

*hides behind a rock* never been good at using the word ontkennen, not in English nor in Dutch! And to be honest, the ontzeggen one (hoe raar om Nederlands op deze manier te gebruiken, lol!) sounds much better and actualy what I meant! *Tries to imitate Ten* You're brilliant! Molto bene :D

Can't remember me having problems with 'then' and 'than' though. I know the difference between them, but thanks anyway for the explanation!! Hehe you sound a bit like an English grammar teacher indeed! But that's good: you can teach me stuff, lol! I always say to myself that if my future as a doctor doesn't work out, I'll do something in the English language, like teacher of whatever!!

So, if you don't mind, I'm going to use that sentence ;D
Thanks again for the advice and corrections. Already learned a lot thanks to you!! xx

Thread 9

spellweaver731 November 30 2011, 03:21:54 UTC

Aww! I love the way I always find your fics at bed time. Now I am off to have lovely Rose/Doctor dreams.

night_n_sky November 30 2011, 16:18:08 UTC

*smiles* I hope you had a nice dream! :) x

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night_n_sky November 30 2011, 16:18:19 UTC

Hehe :)

emraldeyedauter December 22 2011, 03:22:54 UTC

I made it finally. So sorry but I didn't forget. And it was worth the wait. Beautiful writing from you. Ah our dear Doctor is so loveable but unsure of himself when it comes to emotions. So glad Rose managed to tell him how she feels so they can be free to love as they should be. Well done hon.

night_n_sky January 14 2012, 20:57:18 UTC

It's ok if you don't have time, I understand *grrrrr real life stress*!! Thanks for reading and the lovely comment. Unsure Doctor is so cute so that's why I tried to write him like that. These are the moments I can hug him and never wanting to let go! Although... I always want to do that, hehe!! *happy sigh* Rose is such a brave girl and I love the way she evolved throughout the series, so someone had to take the first step!! Rose and Ten are meant for each other and in my mind and heart, they're so in love and together forever <3 x