Comments | nicki1990: TSCC Fic: It's Good to be Neighborly-Part 2

nicki1990

TSCC Fic: It's Good to be Neighborly-Part 2

Jul 03, 2011 09:43

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fig_aruna July 5 2011, 00:29:50 UTC

The hilarity continues, and the characters are still so spot-on!! This chapter had a bit of very cool character bits for Sarah amid the levity. Loved the strained, subtle reactions to some of Cameron's more cutting observations.

And Brenda and Kaci + Sarah's and Cameron's protectiveness in response-- major love <3333!!

nicki1990 July 5 2011, 04:12:26 UTC

So it's still funny, that's certainly a relief :)Happy to know the characterization still fits. Read enough of my stuff and you'll quickly see that I do better with characters than with actual plot. Hopefully I can write a decent Brenda-gets-what's-coming-to-her chapter to finish this off, and hopefully you'll comment on that one as well. Again, thanks for the feedback.