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nicis_anatomy

[Drabble] Seven Roses

Apr 22, 2010 09:00

TITLE: Seven Roses
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Timothy McGee (implied: Abby/Tim)
GENRE: Gen, Angst
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 200
SUMMARY: Tim brings Abby seven black roses … one for each day. Written for prompt #16 "Rose" for drabble123 and challenge #080 "Black" for ncisdrabble100.
WARNINGS: English still isn't my native language (although I wish) and the story is not beta'd ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, ncis: tim mcgee, ncis: abby_mcgee, community: ncisdrabble100, fanart: drabble, community: drabble123

Comments 17

ami_ven April 22 2010, 07:13:25 UTC

You write the most beautiful sad stories ever! This was great.

nicis_anatomy April 22 2010, 10:48:08 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it. I was playing with the idea for weeks now, but I had a hard time 'killing' Abby :(

cyad April 22 2010, 08:36:46 UTC

omigod, that was so heartwrenching. And always beautifully written. **reaches for another tissue**

nicis_anatomy April 22 2010, 10:48:48 UTC

Really? Thank you very much. *hands over some tissues*

cyad April 22 2010, 11:20:47 UTC

really. **Thnaks for tissues before grabbing and sneezing noisily**

nakeisha April 22 2010, 10:10:21 UTC

*Swallows hard*

*Wipes eyes*

Ooooooh. So painfully good. So full of emotion. So excellent.

Poor, poor Timmy.

nicis_anatomy April 22 2010, 10:49:49 UTC

Thank you very much, Nikki. I'm glad you liked it. It wasn't easy to 'kill' Abby. Guess that's why I hesitated so long before writing it down.
Yes, indeed. Poor Timmy *hugs him*

nakeisha April 22 2010, 11:01:42 UTC

I know, I know. Killing characters is always hard.

*Joins in hugging Timmy*

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nicis_anatomy April 22 2010, 16:18:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - even when it was sad ;)

katie087 April 22 2010, 12:31:34 UTC

:O

I actually have tears in my eyes. The thought of this scenario just makes me want to cry! Even in this sad set of circumstances you captured McGee's loyalty. The last couple of lines were especially powerful. Well done.
(ps- I love that you wrote Jethro into it!)

nicis_anatomy April 22 2010, 16:20:21 UTC

*offers tissue* I didn't want to make you cry :( *head-slaps herself* But then again ... it must have been good, when it had such in impact on you.
Thank you!! *hugs you*
Jethro had to be in it. I even had Mortimer in the first draft, but two dogs were too much or only 200 words :( Next time ...