[Oneshot] Rule #25

Dec 09, 2009 11:27

TITLE: Rule #25
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Tony, Kate, Gibbs
GENRE: Gen, General, Humour
RATING: PG-13 (for some language)
WORD COUNT: 1000
SUMMARY: Tony discovers something on Kate’s computer that makes even Gibbs curious - Written for prompt #27 "Computer" for ncis1000words
NOTES: I wrote this (in a slightly different and longer version) as a birthday present for ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, community: ncis1000words, ncis: anthony dinozzo, ncis: jethro gibbs, ncis: kate todd, fanart: fanfiction

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nakeisha December 9 2009, 11:23:28 UTC
*Applauds*

Oh, Nici, this is so good. I love it. Superb characterisation - I actually felt sorry for DiNozzo when he was between Kate and Gibbs.

Great humour and interaction.

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nicis_anatomy December 9 2009, 12:04:52 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad the story hasn't lost all of its humour the original/longer one has. I wasn't so sure ...
And yes, for the first time I really felt sorry for Tony in one of my stories. But I also feel for Kate because what happened to her could easily happen to me, too. Except that I normally don't read such tearjerker stuff *g*

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weird_fin December 9 2009, 13:31:36 UTC
Aw amusing. :)

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nicis_anatomy December 9 2009, 16:27:40 UTC
Thank you!

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deathcomes4u December 9 2009, 13:32:19 UTC
Poor DiNozzo stuck between Kate and Gibbs like that, haha. The ending amused me, nicely done!

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nicis_anatomy December 9 2009, 16:27:14 UTC
Thank you! Yes, indeed. Poor Tony ... but he deserved it ;)

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ehowton December 9 2009, 14:43:12 UTC
Nicely done!

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nicis_anatomy December 9 2009, 16:26:38 UTC
Thank you!

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mapleshade December 9 2009, 15:17:54 UTC
LOL. I loved this. Poor Kate. Hmmmmm. I wonder if someone at work were to catch me reading this story? Darn, no Gibbs-like people here! Your characterizations are spot-on and I love your humor. One tiny thing, it says "before I have to chance my mind again." and I think you mean "change" instead.

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nicis_anatomy December 9 2009, 16:26:21 UTC
I was having the same thoughts at work ;)
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. And of course it should be "change". Will edit it right now. Thank you!

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