OK, I loved all of this, as always, but reading that part about Puck and Rachel on the tracks literally made me shake a little - I could totally, completely understand that all of this was being said and felt by a 9-year-old, and I could also understand how horrible that must've felt. You wrote that so, so well; I absolutely had to tell you that. And I love the little flashbacks he has to it in the rest of the chapter, too - really, really nicely done.
I just adore your grasp of these characters, especially Puck. I love that they've grown up but there's a really clear history to them, and that they're really the same people we've seen on the show.
Okay, so I'm totally supposed to be doing work right now, but I promised you a review so here it is!
I LOVED THIS. I can't believe you were worried about posting! The flashbacks were awesome (and you know I'm totally a flashback whore, see everything I've written LMAO) and added so damn much to the dynamic between these two! The scene on the train tracks had my stomach in knots, even knowing she was obviously going to be okay. And the way she threw his words back at him...stupid stupid boy.
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I just adore your grasp of these characters, especially Puck. I love that they've grown up but there's a really clear history to them, and that they're really the same people we've seen on the show.
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I LOVED THIS. I can't believe you were worried about posting! The flashbacks were awesome (and you know I'm totally a flashback whore, see everything I've written LMAO) and added so damn much to the dynamic between these two! The scene on the train tracks had my stomach in knots, even knowing she was obviously going to be okay. And the way she threw his words back at him...stupid stupid boy.
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VMars in the hizzy!
And you know I can never properly express my feelings in words, so I'm keeping with the gif theme I've got going.
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