And So It Seemed To Confess 3/5

[nicalyse]

Title: And So It Seemed To Confess
Chapter: 3/5
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 6,200
Summary: AU He isn't worried about Rachel talking about him being in therapy at school. Nope, Puck's worried that Rachel might tell her dad what Puck used to do and Dr. Berry will get him sent back to juvie.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[sanae1215]

Can I kiss you? This is adorable.

[nicalyse]

Thanks, sweets. ♥

[sneaker328]

You make me feeeeeel so many feeeeeeeeelings. Urgh.

All the Quinn/Beth stuff -- heartbreaking. This line in particular slayed me: "He only knew Rachel's name because Quinn told him, and he did this horrible thing to her over and over again to impress Quinn, who, in the grand scheme of things, didn't give a fuck. It's just another example of how she used him, how he let her use him."

Puck's reaction to the slushy -- superb. Everything about it, from remembering why he started doing it himself, to wanting her to know just how sorry he was, to threatening Karofsky...sooo good. It's like we're really watching the journey of a troubled boy becoming a decent man.

And then the last bit. It's ridiculous how sexy these makeout scenes have been considering it's just making out. And yet, totally scorching.

[nicalyse]

Thanks, hon. I think that deep down, Puck has always been a good guy. This story is just a different way that he could have gotten there.

And really, they're just hot together, even when it's mostly innocent. ;)

[kimmi_watch]

Wow. This part may have melted my brain a little bit and I don't even care

[nicalyse]

You're cute.

Writing Puck with Dr. Berry was one of my favorite things in this story, because that's where we really get to know this version of him, and it's also where he learns about himself. The forced introspection aspect of it made for an interesting internal dynamic that I didn't really anticipate, but liked writing a lot.

Thanks for reading, darling! ♥

[smc_27]

Puck and his honesty make this whole thing for me. Not just with Rachel, though obviously that, too, but with Dr. Berry. It's great to see him working through some stuff. It's also always fun to read about them making out, so.

[nicalyse]

Thanks, doll! They are good at that making out stuff, huh?

[enchantedrose80]

I can't say any more than what everyone else has already said, except that I love this story and can't wait to read more....which as been said before too...

[nicalyse]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're liking it!