That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 11/17

[nicalyse]

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 11/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 8,025
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[smc_27]

Sorry. I'd leave a proper comment, but I'm busy getting out my pink glitter paint so I can draw hearts all around this.

Also, Rachel and the ducks. Just...adorable.

[nicalyse]

Pink glitter paint! ♥

[shelz14]

Incredible update! Wow, it was really long! I loved how detailed everything got. Amazing job!

[nicalyse]

The next chapter is a little bit longer, then they get just a little shorter to the end. I'm glad you're enjoying it though!

[katertots_78]

Update, yay

[nicalyse]

It must be said that I love Mike Chang. Full stop. But I'm really glad that you picked up on the way they're each growing; different, but coming together, you know?

In my head, Anna is the kind of girl you want to be friends with. (Well, that I want to be friends with because she's an honest bitch. Most people actually don't love the honest bitch.) There's always chance (likelihood) that people will just hate whatever you do when Puck and Rachel aren't immediately together and fluff-tastic, and while I don't generally care, it is nice to hear that you liked her.

Originally, Finn and Santana were supposed to get a bit more of their own story in this, but Puck and Rachel got long-winded enough that it fell by the wayside. But I will never not love them, and we aren't done with them entirely yet. ;)

Thanks for the fantastic comment, darling! ♥

[sneaker328]

Mike and Rachel! Rowr. They're bendy, heh. (Man, I can't even touch my toes.) Interesting that they were able to have that kind of uncomplicated casual-dating-with-benefits relationship, and Puck could have it with Anna...yet when it came to each other, Puck seemed to think it wasn't possible. Very very curious to see what will happen now that they're cohabitating...

[nicalyse]

I want to really respond to all of this, but in doing so, I would probably spoil my own story, so I'll just say thank you.

But yes, Mike Chang for always. ;)

[vanilladaze]

LIVING TOGETHER! These things you are doing to me, woman. This story just keeps getting more and more amazing. First off, thank you for feeding my Mike/Rachel emotions with a completely wonderful FWB relationship. They were so much fun to read, and your Mike voice absolutely matches the one in my head. I was sorta meh about Anna before, but ~God, I love her now with her revenge sex. Yes! As soon as Puck mentioned the internship, I just knew you were gonna torture me with "living together but not together" situations. Puck being all ~guilty and adorable, Rachel being like "you idiot, you're staying with me, and the ducks in the park... All three melted my heart. I really like seeing Rachel deal with the third anniversary of her Dad's death, and that Puck was her go-to for that. Also, Santana and Finn return! I loved that Puck was all "but what about Rach"' and then had a bitch-fit when he found out about Mike-- silly boy.

Amazing as always, and can't wait for more <3

[nicalyse]

Aw, thank you so much! It's so great to hear that you think it gets better as you go!

I love Mike Chang. I love the idea of Mike and Rachel together, and at some point will get around to writing it. Anna was a super-minor character, yes, but I kind of love her. Of course, in my head, I know lots of lots of things about her that you don't. Rest assured, she is just as amazing as the revenge sex makes you think she is. ;)

Rachel has a lot of really cute moments in this. I like them like this a lot, friends with just a touch of awkward.

I have zero doubt that you are going to enjoy the next chapter even more than this one; you should let me know if I'm wrong. ;) Thanks for commenting, my darling!