That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 11/17

[nicalyse]

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 11/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 8,025
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[katertots_78]

Update, yay!

There's so much I love about this chapter. I mean, basically the whole thing, but I'll be specific.

Rachel and Mike fucking Chang; well, actually Rachel fucking Mike Chang is made of win. I am so proud of her for just having a friend with benefits with someone she trusts and not actually falling for him. What I find amusing is how both Puck and Rachel are clearly growing up in this and Rachel becomes less serious about things while Puck becomes more so. It's completely fitting.

Anna remains awesome and I like that she and Puck spent a little more time together even if it amounted to exactly nothing when she graduated and left. Some people are only going to be in your life a short while and there's nothing at all wrong with that. What they had was fun while it lasted and it's not surprising to me that Puck probably wouldn't even miss her after she moved.

Santana and Finn! ♥♥♥ YES!

Rachel is healing and while she will always miss her daddy and be sad over his death, it can't consume her forever. Having her go to class and get on with life is the way to go. I do love how she called Puck and told him that she missed everyone today.

Can't wait to see what happens next (I say this every time) now that Puck is living with Rachel for the summer.

♥ this and you!

[nicalyse]

It must be said that I love Mike Chang. Full stop. But I'm really glad that you picked up on the way they're each growing; different, but coming together, you know?

In my head, Anna is the kind of girl you want to be friends with. (Well, that I want to be friends with because she's an honest bitch. Most people actually don't love the honest bitch.) There's always chance (likelihood) that people will just hate whatever you do when Puck and Rachel aren't immediately together and fluff-tastic, and while I don't generally care, it is nice to hear that you liked her.

Originally, Finn and Santana were supposed to get a bit more of their own story in this, but Puck and Rachel got long-winded enough that it fell by the wayside. But I will never not love them, and we aren't done with them entirely yet. ;)

Thanks for the fantastic comment, darling! ♥