The return of fanfiction!

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[enigmaticblues]

Oooh. This is interesting. On so many levels.

[nhpw]

Thanks! I wanted to put something in with Clark, and also to set up why Sheridan would have been second on the list to run Babylon 5 (perhaps was initially first on the list, but was one of the names the Minbari refused initially so they could get Sinclair? I'll likely make a decision about that in the next chapter.) If Clark already had his eye on Sheridan, it's easier to believe he'd give the order personally for Sheridan to take over the station, and that he had some motives in doing so.

[kungfuwaynewho]

This was a great chapter. Love what you did with Clark - it works on so many levels. And the line where John admits to voting for him was just so goddamned creepy, I loved it.

[nhpw]

Thanks! After my shadow-girl-fail back in the first couple of chapters, I wanted this one to really say what I wanted to say, so I'm glad came out well.

[singer_shaper]

What they said, plus I really liked the line about respecting Lochley more than loving her.

[nhpw]

Thanks. I... didn't really feel like I needed to spend a lot of time on Lochley, except to say that it didn't work, but given what happens later I thought it was also important to point out that he didn't walk away hating her.