I promised Porn today.

[nhpw]

John Sheridan was unsure about a great many things in his life.  He did not know what made the sky blue on Earth and Minbar but red on Brakir; he did not know what caused a star to go supernova; he did not know what the next year or five or ten would hold for his family, his empire… himself.  But he knew right here and now that he loved this woman

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[kungfuwaynewho]

I will leave a more comprehensive review tomorrow - I'm running around the house like a crazy son of a bitch at the moment - but just wanted to let you know that I think this is just the absolute perfect ending for this series. I love it.

[nhpw]

I'm glad :)

Hope everything is OK! Nobody should spend their Sunday night running around the house like a crazy SOB.

[kungfuwaynewho]

Oh, everything's fine! I had a thumbs-down Murphy's Law weekend, but last night it was mostly just that I was running around trying to get all my shit together for work in the morning - I like to have all my clothes out, lunch made, bag packed, so I don't have to worry about it in the morning. I was particularly frazzled last night, heh.

[enigmaticblues]

Oh, John and Delenn. ♥

[nhpw]

:)

They are cute, aren't they?

[kungfuwaynewho]

Okay, I promised an actual talky-meat comment. One thing I really liked about this - and wasn't expecting, though I'm not sure why - was the conversation they have throughout. It really works, and it ties up so many of the issues and worries they'd each had throughout this series. This chapter wasn't just about "and then they had sex;" I don't think that would have worked after the first five chapters. This works perfectly.

Though the porn was pretty good, too. ;)

[nhpw]

Lookit you, picking out things in my story that I didn't even realize were there.

...I mean I totally planned it that way. Yes.