The Third Time is the Charm

[pinky_supergirl]

Title:  The Third Time is The Charm
Author:  Bec
Pairing:  Nathan and Haley Scott
Rating:  Mature Adult
Word Count: 5725
Spoilers/Warnings: None past season 4
Disclaimer: I own none of one tree hill, which is obvious, coz if i did there'd be much more nudity in the show!

This was written as my entry to the 'You want me to wear what?' costume challenge on

Comments

[bluelilyrose]

Firstly, I'm so glad you were able to finish this, Bec! I hated that NH's second wedding was ruined and they (and us viewers) missed out on having a proper honeymoon. This definitely helps make up for it. ;)

You did a great job of capturing Haley's emotions as she was clearing out her wardrobe and looking at old photographs and I ♥ the scene where Nathan finds her crying and starts comforting her.

Loved them as giggly newlyweds when they were checking in and the sex scene, was hot as hell!

This bit though has to be my favourite part of the whole story:

*** “So gorgeous, how was that for a wedding night

[bluelilyrose]

Btw, I wasn't on MSN earlier when you IM'ed me. The damn thing has been playing up for me recently and I haven't been able to log in so it might be an idea to e-mail me directly at this address: egyptian_pixie@yahoo.co.uk if you need to get hold of me in a hurry.

[pinky_supergirl]

Thanks for the review Diane, I'm really happy that you liked it! And thanks for the new contact email address too... i know how frustrating msn can be, in fact i'm almost ready to uninstall it. *hugs* Becca

[elleisforlovee]

Rain would have made it perfect...in the same way that the last line made that story perfect. Wow. I almost fainted. That was so nicely done. I'm jealous of your skill. *lol* Thanks for giving me hope for the new season. God only knows how much I need it =]

x.Elle

[pinky_supergirl]

I was tempted to throw in a balcony scene with some rain, just to make it perfect, but i thought i'd better save something for the next fic, lol. Glad you liked it Elle, thanks for the review. *hugs* Becca

[dawnieangel]

I'm glad you stepped into something different with this Bec hon because you really pulled it off well! I loved it!

[pinky_supergirl]

Thanks Dawnie... it really means a lot to me that you liked this fic, cos you know i always value your opinion, even if it means that i have to rein in my overzealousness, lol. Love ya, Becca xxoo

[lorilozz]

Great job Bec. It was nice to see you try something a bit different. I love that you went with an angsty angle to begin with. There's definitely a lot of painful memories for Haley surrounding the accident.

Your smut was brilliant as usual, and I think I already told you, but I'll tell you again - my favourite line was “It’s not about you being sexy… it’s about you being mine.” Possessive Nathan is awesome.

[pinky_supergirl]

Hehe, you know i love my smut... Thanks for the review babe, and the compliment; this story came out a lot different to how it started, but i'm happier with the end result that i think i would have been had i stuck to the original plan...(did that make sense?) Anyway, thanks :) xoxo Bec

[greatness23]

Excellent story with a great ending with rain being mentioned. I can just imagine how perfect it would've been if it was included. Maybe that could be a 2nd part to it? ;)

Thanks for writing this story that was about the 2nd honeymoon NH never got. Hate the show didn't give it to us but your story definitely made up for it. =)

[pinky_supergirl]

Thanks for the review Pat, I'm glad you liked it. :) - Becca