The Third Time is the Charm
Title: The Third Time is The Charm
Author: Bec
Pairing: Nathan and Haley Scott
Rating: Mature Adult
Word Count: 5725
Spoilers/Warnings: None past season 4
Disclaimer: I own none of one tree hill, which is obvious, coz if i did there'd be much more nudity in the show!
This was written as my entry to the 'You want me to wear what?' costume challenge on ( Read more... )
Author: Bec
Pairing: Nathan and Haley Scott
Rating: Mature Adult
Word Count: 5725
Spoilers/Warnings: None past season 4
Disclaimer: I own none of one tree hill, which is obvious, coz if i did there'd be much more nudity in the show!
This was written as my entry to the 'You want me to wear what?' costume challenge on ( Read more... )
You did a great job of capturing Haley's emotions as she was clearing out her wardrobe and looking at old photographs and I ♥ the scene where Nathan finds her crying and starts comforting her.
Loved them as giggly newlyweds when they were checking in and the sex scene, was hot as hell!
This bit though has to be my favourite part of the whole story:
*** “So gorgeous, how was that for a wedding night?”
Moaning with satisfaction Haley snuggled closer into him, pressing a couple of feather light kisses against his chest and shoulder.
“Hmmm… pretty good… almost perfect.”
Nathan scoffed and pushed himself up onto one elbow to look down at the cheeky teasing grin on her face.
“Oh really?” He laughed, a challenging grin adorning his lips. “So what would have made it absolutely perfect?”
She leaned in to him, pushing herself up so she was at his eye level, stroking one finger down his sweaty cheek as she huskily whispered one word which had him groaning in agreement.
“Rain.” ***
*sigh*
Thanks for taking part in this challenge and I hope you'll be inspired to take part in the next one. :D
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