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Fic: Puppy Love - Hugo/Scorpius

Dec 08, 2011 12:03

Title: Puppy Love
Creator: hellusbellus
Prompt Number: 13
Rating: PG-13 (Light R)
Pairing/characters: Scorpius Malfoy/Hugo Weasley
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *Original Characters, 17-year-old with mildly sexual thoughts*
Medium or word count: ~12,500 words
Summary: Hugo Weasley is just the cutest little stalker ever to out a Prince of Slytherin.
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fic: length: 10-15k, fic: pairing: hugo/scorpius, *2011

Comments 19

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hellusbellus January 4 2012, 18:10:05 UTC

Yay! Thank you! I'm flattered that you like it so much. It was important to me that Chris not automatically accept Scorpius being gay, because I just didn't feel like that was a realistic reaction from a seventeen-year-old bloke. Horrid generalization, of course, but I thought it would be unfair to expect Chris to be instantly fine with such a major change in his best mate. Also, it created lovely conflict, haha. Thank you for your awesome review!

lamerezouille December 14 2011, 09:49:44 UTC

Scorpius/Hugo is not my usual cuppa, but this was too sweet and too good to pass up!
This was really good and I loved all the secondary characters and Hugo was just ♥. All their emotions felt very realistic and I very weirdly loved the ribcage scene, too.

Awesome!

hellusbellus January 4 2012, 18:19:38 UTC

I'd never considered Scorpius/Hugo either, but now I find them nesting in my brain, heh. In any case, I'm glad you stepped out of your zone and read this. I quite enjoyed writing the ribcage scene, so I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Awesome comment! :)

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hellusbellus January 4 2012, 18:21:59 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I tried for genuineness, so I'm glad that their emotions felt real to you.

kawasakininja December 30 2011, 01:02:52 UTC

WHAT?!?! NOOOOOOO! WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY!!! I didn't notice at all that I have already neared the ending and then it was suddenly over and I really really wanted to know more about Scorpius and Hugo! And Miranda and Chris! Is it terribly wrong of me to want Miranda and Chris to hook up together now? Wait, if they were sharing a table at The Three Brooms were they hooking up! And Chris came out as such a badass in from of Miranda! :D Oh, God, I know the warning stated original characters and I usually find myself liking them but I never got invested in two OCs like this before. I felt bad when they made fun of Miranda, I never even though she was stupid, but that stating the obvious things was her Slytherin way of messing up/influencing people. Chris was such a hardass. *swoon* I was so happy that he stepped up in the end for Scorpius and Hugo. I couldn't help but worry about Chris (like Scorpius) but I had little faith in him, so glad it wasn't wrong! I also liked (smooth Captain) Blaise and Flint, they were great for what we ( ... )

hellusbellus January 4 2012, 18:45:43 UTC

Okay, so, I feel like my response is going to be just completely inadequate. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this lovely (and long) comment! You seriously made my entire day. I opened it, read it, and then giggled and clapped and made funny, happy faces. It was quite embarrassing, but I didn't care ( ... )

ura_hd February 7 2012, 02:59:25 UTC

Absolutely lovely story! It is not usually my parring of choice, but this story is brilliant!