[Oneshot] Always In Pain

May 20, 2008 14:39

Warning: Super Tears Attack! Please prepare tissue as your shield. Thank you XD

I can't fight this feeling anymore )

fic: pikame, #oneshot

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hanny2luv May 20 2008, 10:44:28 UTC
Poor Pi. He loves someone who doesn't love him back.
I really hope he can find a new love, since he decided to move on.

I love it, although it's angst. Let's just say i have a weird taste because lately i love angst fic so much, especially if one of the main character died.

Anyway, good work as usual.It's really sad but since i'm a hardcore girl, i don't cry.

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newssuki May 20 2008, 11:14:39 UTC
Yes. I don't want to end him in agony.. but uh let's just say maybe he should find a new beginning of his life..

I know u being such angst shipper.. but im glad u read it.. coz i don't feel like reading anymore.. hahah.. tears me alot! but maybe i want to write the happy version of this LoL

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kawaiikame May 24 2008, 02:26:00 UTC
ITS SO SWEEET *O* love it so much

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newssuki May 24 2008, 03:48:33 UTC
uhh.. im not sure if "sweet" is the best word for u to describe.. oh well, glad u love it <33.. but don't u feel its a bit heartbreaking?? LoL its angst towards the end.. XDD i thought no one wud read this one.. hahah =D coz its very heartbreaking for me =P

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kawaiikame May 24 2008, 17:54:50 UTC
yeah i know its heart broken but the sweet is how yamapi take care of kame chan X3 .. but yeah the end was sad ;_; poor yamapi

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dephi May 30 2008, 05:47:54 UTC
If I could turn back time and caught you, would you notice me, Kazu?

Owww.. So heartbreaking....>.<

Therefore, please smile more and believe that when you’re in need, I’ll always be there for you, Kazu…

He closed his eyes, feeling the cold night air as he sat down on the lazy chair. His tears suddenly flowed down his cheeks. He tried to hold it, but the pain in his heart couldn’t endure the long wait feelings that he forced not to show.

Just for tonight, Yamapi! Just for tonight.

Oh my gosh.. Poor YamaP.. I understand that though.. He's a man, and well, unlike us who can freely show our emotion...

And the last sentence...
Goshhh...
I LOVE thisss.......♥♥♥

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newssuki May 30 2008, 07:20:46 UTC
hahhaha U + Angst = Heaven? X3333
yeah sad, i thought of making not a sequel but another version of this =P but its not canon, probably AU.

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dephi May 30 2008, 07:53:19 UTC
Yupp...
I LOVE angst.. For now at least..
Ahahaha...
Heyyy....
You're having to many works at hand you know... Hahahaha..^^

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kumagorolove September 8 2008, 03:42:17 UTC
This was so heartbreaking. PI! ):
I loved it very much.

The ending was so sad! T_______T

♥♥♥

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newssuki September 8 2008, 05:10:54 UTC
yes, when i wrote this, i was on ANGST mode. >.<
i dunt mean to end pikame like this,
but at one time, i would like to write
pi's centric about his r'ship with kame..
though im torn between akame and pikame, i love pikame and cant avoid it..

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