Gift fic for natsudive... the second (part two)

Sep 17, 2011 20:51

r: r, p: koyama/shige

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wrenne25 September 20 2011, 12:09:31 UTC
Ah, this fic leaves me with a big smile on my face. What can I say, "I would let you poison people" is somehow such a cute, out of left field confession of love. And yet, somehow the dots do seem to connect in Koyama's brain.

And the poor boys, they both suffered so much they deserved a happy ending. And yet in all that angsting there were something things that cracked me up.

I love SUGOI SHIGE ... that's such a perfect moment and you've definitely gotta have a catchcry.

And the other line that totally made me laugh out loud, after already chuckling over I imagine the squinty eyed one is the holdout -

was this line:
I do feel sorry for Kato! 10 years of waiting for someone to get a clue is enough to make anyone a clumsy fuck.That totally cracked me up ( ... )

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haruka21 October 17 2011, 15:22:46 UTC
Sorry this message is very late but all things considering...
I'm glad you liked it. Sugoi Shige just kind of came to me when I was writing this and idek about the other. Anyway thank you for reading.

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kaminikaku September 21 2011, 12:12:49 UTC
Wow, can I just say that I loved each bit of this? I loved the concept, loved the little mystery bit you wove in about what the real purpose of the show was, loved the idea of the tv show as something that a) Japan TV would show and b) would be a perfect vehicle for someone like Shige who is somewhat coordinated and physical, but is not a classic sportsman, as it would pull in the ordinary viewer. loved the interactions between KoyaShige, the respect and the understanding and the trust...and that Shige's mom trusts Koyama to look after him. The Sugoi Shige bit was fabulous, and and and and damn it I kind of wish we really had footage of that....would make a perfect bookend for Soukon. Loved this, I think you did a great job!

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haruka21 October 17 2011, 15:37:03 UTC
Sorry for the lateness of this reply.
Thanks for your lovely comment :). Japaneses TV is a wonderful and messed up place. I just hope NEWS (or Koyashige) really will appear on a regular TV show soon. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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haruka21 October 17 2011, 16:07:57 UTC
I'm Sorry it took me so long to respond. I got very behind on things while I was on vacation and then all the NEWS news happened.

Anyway I'm glad you liked it. This is the longest fic I have ever written and though the concept was what I had always planned I never intended for it to be so long. Yes it would be wonderful to see them hosting a TV show like that. I think they could really do that kind of format justice.

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