this is not pretty so be very careful with it. you have been warned.

[newra_skylarke]

wrote this in a poetry workshop about three years ago. its the only piece of literature i can honestly say i'm proud of, so be nice to it! i still love it even now. please note i'm not a self harmer, and never have been, though lots of my friends have been.

a thousand questions

Caged, like an animal,
Trammelled, like some wild thing,
Trapped, inside a

Comments

[xfreudianxslipx]

I really like this :)

"Rain, falls down upon me,
Mingles, with my tears,
Washes, away my fears,
I'm now, as cold as stone."

I love and can relate to that part.

Great job, dear :)

[newra_skylarke]

cheers! i wrote it in a performance poetry workshop a few years ago. its the only piece i've ever been happy with, and the runners of the workshop said that while it was very dark it was very emotive, and therefore great as a performance poetry piece!

thanks for commenting!

[xfreudianxslipx]

I'm glad other people recognize the beauty of it :)

You're most welcome, dear [=