SERIES 4 SPOILERS LOTS OF!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

[newra_skylarke]

Title: I don’t think he’s wrong.

Rating: NC-17

Summary: The Doctor notices his half human self and Jack are not where he left them.

Pairings: Jack/Ten, Jack/10.5, Ten/Rose, Rose/10.5, DoctorDonna/Jack (Only mentioned in passing. Very briefly.) DoctorDonna/Rose (same as before, very brief and it isn’t what you are thinking I promise.), Jack/Ianto (

Comments

[the_summoning_d]

“One day, sometime in the future, when the Welsh kick me out of their country for my inability to learn their language..."

LOVE! Soooo much love for this line XD And the rest of the fic is pretty awesome too...even if the spelling mistakes keep assaulting my eyes...

[newra_skylarke]

i'm sorry!!!! i'm sending it to my beta for her to read and then i'll edit the post!!! promise.... well... i will when she sends it back.....

[slyreflection]

"re-ruffled his hair to get rid of the “just shagged” look that Jack must surely have created"
That and "Jack Hardness" which I'm sorry to say is a pun that (shouldn't, but does anyway) make me laugh my ass off.
*High Fives Donna for being made of WIN*
:D

[mrssjw]

Gah! I am fully prepared to give you cake for the rest of your natural born life, so long as you don't stop writing! I mean, really!

I loved certain bits especially; the part where the Doctor is jealous of himself, (something only he could imagine being a possibility), the Jack Hardness bit and the Donna rummaging around in the Doc's head are probably all my favorite moments. Although, the bittersweetness of the Doctor and Rose's imminent re-parting is fantastically well-played, because, obviously, he would know it's coming, but she wouldn't, just like in the episode.

You are brilliant and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. A few spellings things, here and there, most notably the word "WRONG" when Donna's in his head. Other than that, not too shabby.

And hey, if you ever need a back-up beta, I'm more than happy to kick in and help! ^_^

[newra_skylarke]

i am more than happy to recieve cake. gotta love cake.

i just looked at the WRONG thing... oops.... will go look at that now. sorry.
have a couple of little stories on paper to type up, might send them to you!!

give me your email, and i'll type them up...

[mrssjw]

You can send it to rissa.mail88@yahoo.com That's the address I use for beta-reading, so I'll be sure to get it! ^_^

*hands over large piece of chocolate cake*

[newra_skylarke]

loving the icon. all we need is David Tennant to say that. or John Barrowman. or even better lets have both *drool*

anyway. will send them to you... out of curiousity, do you read RPS? or should i not send it?

*gobbles cake* yum

[robi_travels]

Liked it, thank you. Looking forward to more.

[voyuerer]

This was so sad but great. I loved Donna in this. Poor Doctor