Old dog learns new tricks

[nerinedorman]

It's always so refreshing when a fresh eye points out gremlins in a manuscript. Without the wonders of internet and email, how the HELL did authors do this in the "old" days?

What did I learn?
I still have a bit of passive voice creeping through at times.
I sometimes muddle the order of events in a sentence which, although not wrong, can be reworded.

Comments

[bittermint]

I still have problems with the cause-and-effect thing myself. Takes awhile to rid oneself of these bad habits.

That said, I have to say how impressed I was with KR. Hard to believe it was your first book. You've got a fan for life right here, and urban fantasy isn't usually my thing. :)

[nerinedorman]

Thanks! Well, you'll be glad to know that the sequel is entering the production schedule as soon as Nay gets the contract.

BTW... email me with your postal address and I'll mail you a promo photo as thanks.

There are only 50 and they'll only go to people who're special to me.