I love this story. And I love you. I love that you're still writing and I always get a jolt of excitement when I see you've updated a story, so above all else, thank you. <3
Love how you're writing Callie through this. And the emotion from Sofia seems so logical. I could completely see her withdrawing upon the realization of what was happening, then suddenly becoming her bubbly self when she's no longer leaving.
Very curious to see what your plan here. I assume they will eventually get back together, so I'm really interested to see how you weave that together.
Oh, also love Kepner and Bailey! Really enjoying this and looking so forward to more!
Thanks for your kind words. This one is hard to write and once a chapter is done it takes days to psyche myself up to start again which explains the long chapters.
The ending keeps changing mainly because it was supposed to end with Callie realizing how awful she's been and how she shoulders close enough to 50% of the blame for them no longer being together and happy. It was meant to be a "Callie got hercomeuppance at last" kind of fic with an ending that was very final with no possibllity of redemption.
Then that changed ( I decided I couldnt kill Arizona just to give Callie her comeuppance ) and it keeps changing so as of now there is no absolute guarantee that this will end with them together.
But although I despise what Callie became in the last few seasons I still hark back to who she used to be, the Girl who cared so much, the girl that Arizona fell hook line and sinker for all those years ago. And I reserve the right, in my wee fic, to resurrect her, maybe ;-)
That was a really good chapter, they all have been. Sad, tragic, and even humorous at times. The barking up the wrong tree comment made me laugh out loud. In my head, I could envision the whole conversation with Sofia going down. Still wondering where you are going with this story which makes me like it even more.
I'm in, reunion or not. This is a very good story, but the idea of pulling that off excites me, though I agree, it's a challenge. But you're an amazing writer so maybe.......?
I really love this story. I admit I'll love it more if it eventually brings they back together as a couple. Even if it just ends with the hint of it... then maybe a sequel?
I was nervous you were going to have Callie die. I am so glad you didn't go there. I want Callie to own her mistakes in the marriage, too... don't get me wrong. I think you can achieve both aims.
I love the way you wrote Sofia. I love the way you write all the characters; it's just that kids can be tough to write because we see so little of them, yet the viewers do have a sense of how they should be, personality-wise. Your take on her 'voice' is very much how I picture her.
I like writing Sofia too. Callie dying never occurred to me but now that I think of it.... If they were to reunite I think it could only be after the possibility of it seems lost. Conversations need to happen that are not going to be pleasant, I'm not sure I can pull off a full reunion but we shall see. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Love how you're writing Callie through this. And the emotion from Sofia seems so logical. I could completely see her withdrawing upon the realization of what was happening, then suddenly becoming her bubbly self when she's no longer leaving.
Very curious to see what your plan here. I assume they will eventually get back together, so I'm really interested to see how you weave that together.
Oh, also love Kepner and Bailey! Really enjoying this and looking so forward to more!
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The ending keeps changing mainly because it was supposed to end with Callie realizing how awful she's been and how she shoulders close enough to 50% of the blame for them no longer being together and happy. It was meant to be a "Callie got hercomeuppance at last" kind of fic with an ending that was very final with no possibllity of redemption.
Then that changed ( I decided I couldnt kill Arizona just to give Callie her comeuppance ) and it keeps changing so as of now there is no absolute guarantee that this will end with them together.
But although I despise what Callie became in the last few seasons I still hark back to who she used to be, the Girl who cared so much, the girl that Arizona fell hook line and sinker for all those years ago. And I reserve the right, in my wee fic, to resurrect her, maybe ;-)
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I was nervous you were going to have Callie die. I am so glad you didn't go there. I want Callie to own her mistakes in the marriage, too... don't get me wrong. I think you can achieve both aims.
I love the way you wrote Sofia. I love the way you write all the characters; it's just that kids can be tough to write because we see so little of them, yet the viewers do have a sense of how they should be, personality-wise. Your take on her 'voice' is very much how I picture her.
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Callie dying never occurred to me but now that I think of it....
If they were to reunite I think it could only be after the possibility of it seems lost. Conversations need to happen that are not going to be pleasant, I'm not sure I can pull off a full reunion but we shall see.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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