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neolithicdream

Fear, Anger; Weak, Strong 2/?

Oct 21, 2013 16:55

Title: Fear, Anger;Weak,Strong 2-
Author: Neolithicdream
Pairing/Character: Calzona [always :-( ]
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The sequel to my prequel (Wiped clean) but still a prequel to my original story (Forgive,forget,forever) and if that doesn't confuse you - Congratulations! Still just my happy ending after the devastation of the Season 9 ending. ( Read more... )

art:fanfic, fanfic:callie/arizona

Comments 17

strandedinaber October 21 2013, 18:27:39 UTC

Oh man, breaks my heart :(

neolithicdream October 21 2013, 19:07:02 UTC

I thought this might turn out to be a Drabble when I first had this idea, 5000 words later....sigh

What I want for Christmas are the gifts of succinctness and brevity!

pasha2009 October 21 2013, 19:06:07 UTC

Oh Man! I love how lost Callie is with the "who?" and "what?"
Dude, Callie...context clues?!

neolithicdream October 21 2013, 19:14:16 UTC

She truly is clueless cause after all it has never occurred to her, to view other women that way, when she has Arizona at home. Certainly not a baby doctor like Pocahontas.

ext_1614268 October 21 2013, 19:48:47 UTC

More! I want more. That was awesome. Captivating, even.

neolithicdream October 21 2013, 20:49:33 UTC

Captivating? Well there's a compliment!

Thank you very much.

elledee68 October 21 2013, 19:59:29 UTC

Another great but heartbreaking chapter.

It seems that Arizona's insecurities are so deep rooted that Callie has no idea where they begin.

I wonder if she can do anything to reassure Arizona, or whether Arizona is going to work on this on her own?

As usual I'm looking forward to the next installment, and hopefully get some answers at some point.

neolithicdream October 21 2013, 20:57:08 UTC

Thank you!

Her insecurities are genuine and in that sense are deep but some are of fairly recent origin all the same. Also some of them are entirely about Callie so only Callie's reassurance can help.

Hopefully next ( and last chapter) will answer most questions.

nyladreams October 21 2013, 20:32:09 UTC

This continues to be so great.
Callie and her aloofness is so innocent because she never has/never would entertain the thought of someone else. But at the same time, after everything Arizona has been through, Arizona's insecurities are running deep.

Looking forward to the next installment! :)

neolithicdream October 21 2013, 20:48:03 UTC

Thanks!

I'm looking forward to it myself! The first two were mostly written before Chap 1 was posted, what's supposed to be the final Chapter (3) is a little bit more up in the air but hopefully it will Posted within a few days, a week at most.