Wiped Clean 2 / 3

[neolithicdream]

Title: Wiped Clean 2/3
Author: Neolithicdream 

Pairing/Character: Calzona

Rating: PG-13

Summary: This is just a prequel to a  post Season 9 story I wrote called  "Forgive, forget, forever"  It's probably best ( if not essential) to read that before this as most of what this prequel contains is hinted at or best explained in the original story

Comments

[ext_1614268]

Holy crap that was compelling. Like, I want to tweet it to Shonda compelling. Awesome, awesome work.

[neolithicdream]

Thank you very much!

I'm pretty sure Shondas reply would be "don't tweet me your crazy!" :-)

[ext_1614268]

Maybe. Not sure that's what she considers crazy. But it would likely be better in a letter. I think she DOES appreciate intelligent discourse on the nature of storytelling. What she resents is people who treat her like she's some moron who just fell into this career by fluke.

Though what do I know; I'm a fan of hers. ;)

[nyladreams]

This is so heartbreakingly great. The beauty in forgiveness and love shown, the anguish in the heartache and past devastation.
#TeamCallieANDArizona

[neolithicdream]

Thank you!

#TeamCallieANDArizona indeed!

[calzonafan999]

Nice...wow..poor Arizona she went through so much...

[neolithicdream]

Thanks! Yes she did, they both have.

But they can weather all storms! (Just hope Shonda thinks so.)

[lem0915]

Oh how I wish the Grey's writers had used a tenth of your powerful words for Arizona to let Callie know what she went through, instead of just repeating Cristina's words. Thank you for that, it was very satisfying. Also, Arizona acknowledging that Sofia was born out of a love, even though not what she and Callie shared, showed the depth of her love for Sofia and her family - very in character for her.

[neolithicdream]

Thank you!

Yeah, one thing I've no doubt of is her love for Sofia - if Shonda takes that away....grrrrr......

Anyway thanks for commenting!

[maling5566]

Heartbreakingly wonderful! Wow.

[neolithicdream]

Thanks, glad you liked it.