Hope this is acceptable, Moony!

May 25, 2011 22:30

Title: "Red Cupid"
Series: Black Butler
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Characters/Pairings: SebaCiel, Will/Grell, Ronald/Finny
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,610
Summary: The course of true love never did run smooth...
Notes: Takes place in crescent_moony's Bicentennial series. Sequel to " Killing Time," prequel to "Five Thousand."
To Read: ( Was that really the most creative username you could come up with? )

grell is my homegirl, bicentennial gets its own tag now, fanfiction, i love my otp, fandom: kuroshitsuji

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ASDFGHJKL~<3 <3 <3 crescent_moony May 26 2011, 02:55:23 UTC
OMGOMGOMG SO PUMPED TO FINISH THE WEDDING CHAPTER I'M WORKING ON, NOW. XD

But honestly-- what this really made me want to write was my Finny/Ronald idea. Because I see their one-night-stand (rather, early-in-the-morning-after-copious-drinking-on-top-of-the-island-romp) so clearly in my mind. XD

Also, I'm starting to think you really DID hack into my computer, because you mentioned some details that also sorta get mentioned in the wedding fic. XD;;;

ANYWAY, THIS WAS ADORABLE. SO, SO ADORABLE. I giggled and smiled so hard that my cheeks hurt~ ♥ The setup was cute (Grelle WOULD have a sidejob like this), the usernames made me laugh (especially Grelle calling Will out on his), and the letters themselves were so brilliant and IC for the characters involved! You're becoming, lyke, fanfic competition, and I love it. ^_~

I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS NOT A CRITIQUE OR ANYTHING AND I'M SO SORRY IF IT SOUNDS LIKE IT-- IF IT DOES, YOU CAN HIT ME. D: While I do admit that, of all the Bicentennial stories you've written, this one feels the most ( ... )

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:04:10 UTC
AND THUSLY DOES MY EVIL PLAN COME TO FRUITION. >:3

AND THUSLY DOES MY SECOND EVIL PLAN COME TO FRUITION. >8D

Ooh, did I really? I mean, yes! Of course, thanks to my l33t hacking skills...

I had the most fun coming up with the usernames, you have no idea. I'd love for those to get used again! ;)

Yeah, I knew it was a kind of cliche format going into it... But I'm glad you still enjoyed it! This was mainly just meant as a bit of fun, leapfrogging into the middle of our little pre-wedding continuity. Oh, but what was it that I contradicted of your headcanon? I still have time to fix things...

RIGHT BACK ATCHA. 8D

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:11:43 UTC
SO MANY EVIL PLANS COMING TO FRUITION. How DO you keep track of them all? XD

You mean l337 hax0r skillz. ;3

Lawlz, I remember doing an email-based fic once, back in the day. It is fun to play with. XD I'm sure we can find a way to make those names show up again, sometime... >3

There's nothing wrong with a cliche so long as it's done right, and you totally did it right. ♥ Anyway, I dunno if you can really fix this-- mainly because I love the way you handled it, and all... Anyway, in my headcanon, Ciel has no idea the proposal is coming. He'd never really thought about marriage or making their bond "official" or anything like that-- he's content just to be with Sebastian as they are. It's Sebastian alone who wants to take that step, to really prove to Ciel that he's not just there because he has to be. (But I really do love everything about Ciel's letter-- especially the reasons he gives about why he's so hesitant to show affection. So him~ ♥ )

C:

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:13:16 UTC
PS. Also, I keep seeing (And this ain't the norm, he's usually all about the chiquitas, y'know?) and laughing out loud. XD

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12gatsunohime May 26 2011, 03:24:40 UTC
I hope you realize that you just made me feel frightfully inferior in terms of character voice.

I also hope you realize you made me want to write Ronald/Finnian. (Not the scenario Moony was talking about, more like something a little after this, but still.) Given that I will most likely be done with Persona by the end of tonight, it might just happen.

I just. I can't. Oh my god. This is so goddamn cute and horrifyingly in-character and oh my god "Was that really the most creative username you could come up with" I AM DYING, HANNAH.

I love this universe so much it almost hurts, and stories like this are why. This is so amazing, I can't even. You just illustrate all of their relationships so well it's like they could be living down the street from me. I mean, not really, but it feels so real. NGH. ♥

(Oh god, the ideas. THE IDEAS. THEY WON'T LEAVE ME ALONE.)

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:28:41 UTC
No no no no no, shut up. :[

OKAY, THAT IS AWESOME. I will never regret anything that inspires more Ronald/Finny.

Will's was the easiest to figure out, it's so "him." XD;;

INORITE? It's why I love it, too!

(Good. KEEP SWARMING HER, MY CHILDREN...)

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arisingsymphony May 26 2011, 03:39:09 UTC
ICON LOVE.

Also, this story was so cute. :3

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:40:22 UTC
D'aww, thanks to both!

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jiseihakushaku May 26 2011, 06:37:22 UTC

I squealed. And giggled. And d'awwwed.

I really enjoyed (and just simply adore) this fanfiction! It was so wonderful! Definitely one of my favorites in a really long time. :3

You really just made it work. Not sure how to word it better than that. XD; You just pulled it off really well. And Ronald/Finny? I never even really thought of that pairing until now- and damn, do I love it! X'D

Great job! <3

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 12:45:38 UTC
Omigosh, thanks so much for saying so!

Ronald/Finny was one of those things that just came from the universe itself, so I ran with it. I think it's an adorable idea too, but I can't really take credit for it. XD;;

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amanuensis1 May 27 2011, 19:58:31 UTC
backinblack! dontfearthereaper! Ah ha ha ha ha!

I have to say, Grell's advice is spot on! Grell would make a terrific agony aunt.

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neocloud9 May 27 2011, 20:15:20 UTC
She would get off on it, LMFAO. Such a hopeless romantic~

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