Hope this is acceptable, Moony!

May 25, 2011 22:30

Title: "Red Cupid"
Series: Black Butler
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Characters/Pairings: SebaCiel, Will/Grell, Ronald/Finny
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,610
Summary: The course of true love never did run smooth...
Notes: Takes place in crescent_moony's Bicentennial series. Sequel to " Killing Time," prequel to "Five Thousand."
To Read: ( Was that really the most creative username you could come up with? )

grell is my homegirl, bicentennial gets its own tag now, fanfiction, i love my otp, fandom: kuroshitsuji

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ASDFGHJKL~<3 <3 <3 crescent_moony May 26 2011, 02:55:23 UTC
OMGOMGOMG SO PUMPED TO FINISH THE WEDDING CHAPTER I'M WORKING ON, NOW. XD

But honestly-- what this really made me want to write was my Finny/Ronald idea. Because I see their one-night-stand (rather, early-in-the-morning-after-copious-drinking-on-top-of-the-island-romp) so clearly in my mind. XD

Also, I'm starting to think you really DID hack into my computer, because you mentioned some details that also sorta get mentioned in the wedding fic. XD;;;

ANYWAY, THIS WAS ADORABLE. SO, SO ADORABLE. I giggled and smiled so hard that my cheeks hurt~ ♥ The setup was cute (Grelle WOULD have a sidejob like this), the usernames made me laugh (especially Grelle calling Will out on his), and the letters themselves were so brilliant and IC for the characters involved! You're becoming, lyke, fanfic competition, and I love it. ^_~

I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS NOT A CRITIQUE OR ANYTHING AND I'M SO SORRY IF IT SOUNDS LIKE IT-- IF IT DOES, YOU CAN HIT ME. D: While I do admit that, of all the Bicentennial stories you've written, this one feels the most ( ... )

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:04:10 UTC
AND THUSLY DOES MY EVIL PLAN COME TO FRUITION. >:3

AND THUSLY DOES MY SECOND EVIL PLAN COME TO FRUITION. >8D

Ooh, did I really? I mean, yes! Of course, thanks to my l33t hacking skills...

I had the most fun coming up with the usernames, you have no idea. I'd love for those to get used again! ;)

Yeah, I knew it was a kind of cliche format going into it... But I'm glad you still enjoyed it! This was mainly just meant as a bit of fun, leapfrogging into the middle of our little pre-wedding continuity. Oh, but what was it that I contradicted of your headcanon? I still have time to fix things...

RIGHT BACK ATCHA. 8D

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:11:43 UTC
SO MANY EVIL PLANS COMING TO FRUITION. How DO you keep track of them all? XD

You mean l337 hax0r skillz. ;3

Lawlz, I remember doing an email-based fic once, back in the day. It is fun to play with. XD I'm sure we can find a way to make those names show up again, sometime... >3

There's nothing wrong with a cliche so long as it's done right, and you totally did it right. ♥ Anyway, I dunno if you can really fix this-- mainly because I love the way you handled it, and all... Anyway, in my headcanon, Ciel has no idea the proposal is coming. He'd never really thought about marriage or making their bond "official" or anything like that-- he's content just to be with Sebastian as they are. It's Sebastian alone who wants to take that step, to really prove to Ciel that he's not just there because he has to be. (But I really do love everything about Ciel's letter-- especially the reasons he gives about why he's so hesitant to show affection. So him~ ♥ )

C:

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:13:16 UTC
PS. Also, I keep seeing (And this ain't the norm, he's usually all about the chiquitas, y'know?) and laughing out loud. XD

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:20:02 UTC
RONALD'S WAS MY FAVORITE TO WRITE, NOT EVEN GONNA LIE.

But Finny's was the hardest!

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:22:29 UTC
THEY WERE BOTH PERFECT. ♥

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:26:28 UTC
I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THEIR STORY, NOT EVEN GONNA LIE.

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:19:14 UTC
Oh, okay. I guess I was just thinking of Ciel's response here and the way it seemed like he'd simply been waiting all along for Sebastian to get around to asking him... XD;;

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:22:12 UTC
Fair enough. XD Like I said, that's just my headcanon... I'm sure, in retrospect, he really WAS like, "WTF took you so long, demon?" XD;

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:25:33 UTC
LMFAO, I guess it's not too bad that I've only contradicted your headcanon once in all the playing around I've done with your series already... XD;;

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:50:45 UTC
And it's not like something that's even explicitly stated anywhere. It's just how I interpret Ciel's character; there's no right or wrong, really. XD;

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 03:57:46 UTC
I'm just so happy to have actually made you smile/laugh! That's such a personal victory for me, what a stamp of approval... ;o;

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 03:59:16 UTC
You totally did~ :'D *STAMPS OF APPROVAL EVERYWHERE*

(But you make me smile and laugh all the time, so~ XD)

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neocloud9 May 26 2011, 04:02:02 UTC
Well, it's all thanks to this adorable series you've created. ;3;

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crescent_moony May 26 2011, 04:02:42 UTC
D'awwww, thanks~ :'D

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